Reviews for A WhiteWalled Christmas
DJmight chapter 2 . 8/26/2019
Nurse? I thought she was a doctor
MckeeMaus chapter 20 . 1/18/2019
Just saying, in my headcannon for this AU, they named their child Yuki for snow. Lol

Once I picked up this story, I couldn't put it down. Every turn, every twist had my attention ensnared. The characters were perfectly written and not ooc at all. Well, some of the side pairing were out of the blue, but it still worked out. Also: I kept picturing this has a horror game and wishing I could play it, if that makes any sense. Lol

This is the best GaaSaku I have ever read. And no, I'm not just saying that. I truly mean it. I know I'll be coming back to re-read this more than once. Thank you for finishing it!
jacpin2002 chapter 20 . 9/29/2017
Great story!
whatnameshallitake chapter 20 . 2/4/2017

I just wanted to let you know that this story is the BOMB and will hold a very special place in my heart...

I wish you all the best in life...

That's all,until our paths cross again~

*wishing to experience a journey as fun as Sakura's xD*
OptimusPrimegirl213 chapter 1 . 3/28/2016
A little bit of horror works for me
Maleisha chapter 20 . 9/20/2015
namican chapter 20 . 7/11/2015
I can't believe I read all of this in one sitting... At first I wasn't sure if I should read this but something in my head told me that I definitely wouldn't regret reading this. As soon as the breakout plot started I could feel adrenaline pumping through my blood and just... wow... I'm completely and utterly speechless. Then the ending came and I just felt so enraptured in the story. Now, I know that this story is almost two years old now but honestly, this story's perfection definitely won't seem old to me, even when I come back to reread this.
Guest chapter 20 . 2/12/2015
Holy shit! This was probably one of the best if not the best fanfiction I've ever read and I had so much fun reading it! I hope you're proud of this piece because you should be! It was so well written and so well thought out! Reading felt so satisfying oh my god! That was amazing!
Hlyn chapter 20 . 11/18/2014
One of the best stories I've ever read.
Hazel Roses chapter 17 . 10/18/2014
Wow that is deep! The part where Madara said what you hated or loved for is already gone. In this anime, that is definitely the truth.

I didn't think Pein would turn around and fight Madara! That was definitely a good twist. I actually thought thy he would continue ones Suigetsu, Gaara, Kisame, and Sasuke got involved to continue fighting Madara. Orochimaru needs to stop blaming everyone he comes into contact with for Kabuto's death geez. He's so annoying.

So Itachi is alive. I had an inkling that he might be!
Hazel Roses chapter 16 . 10/18/2014
Dang he's not dead lol. At least he is out of commission for a little while. That will do Sakura some good. You know, the poor thing was so frazzled and panicky (I would have been ten times worse) that she didn't think to pinch herself to make sure she wasn't dead. I was screaming "don't go to the light!". This is like a horror movie, people always go where they're not supposed to and they know something isn't right, but the go anyway. Why!

This was written before it was revealed who Tobi was right? I honestly had thought it would have been Madara but after the whole plan and everything had been revealed, it made sense why it was Obito instead. Here, it's like you've combined them into one person lol. I've never seen that done before!

Was Sakura trying to convince Madara of a little hanky panky for Christmas or is my mind in the gutter and she just wanted to talk with him to keep him occupied? I'm guessing it's probably the latter right? Lol.

Whew! Gaara arrived just in time! NOW MAKE LOVE! I know, not the right timing but my inner romance brat is crying!

I must have misread the part with Sakura and Sasori in previous chapters. He really was using a vaginal speculum on her. Sorry I made a joke about it, I honestly read it wrong. I'm glad it was a speculum instead of actually him though. I wish it hadn't have been either, but the speculum is the lesser of the two evils to me.

Awe they are adorable! I'm glad Sakura isn't saying she's in love so early, but when she mentioned marriage, even if it was a joke, that made me feel awkward since to me not being in love and getting married is taboo lol. As I kept reading, I see it wasn't a joke. They're really talking about getting married...hmm.

Wait...NO! Why would you skip the good stuff?! *cries hysterically* What did he eat her out or what happened?! I don't like to guess when it comes to sexual encounters! I understand about the no lemons. I link all of mine to my Tumblr account. Do you has link for lemon? *puppy dog eyes*
Hazel Roses chapter 15 . 10/18/2014
Wait is Killer Bee who Kisame is with?!O.o. I mean I can see it from their battle when Bee took Samehada, but you've definitely shocked me with this one is that's the case!

OMG it is Killer Bee! Holy hell! I really was not expecting that. I'm not much for yaoi pairings so this is definitely a new one to me! Now I have to know if Bee is still alive.

Good Kisame's helping Sakura. That was too close for comfort. As I've told you though I work in Women's Health so when I read speculum, I was thinking about the Pap smear device and going "when did he insert that?" Lol.

It was mentioned that Zetsu was off his medication and it stopped him from drooling and he could talk normal. Do you know if they really give people pills like that? I can't fathom it!

Ah you sly dog! At first I was confused thinking that Orochimaru had some sort of fondness for Kabuto, but that wasn't the case. I could definitely see him mad like this if his ticket to freedom had slipped through his grasp.

Zabuza seems too care free to me. All these laughs and semi jokes I couldn't picture with the Zabuza I remember from the anime. Then again, I remember you said you mainly followed manga persona so maybe that's it. I didn't pick up the manga until we were out of episodes back when Naruto was first learning how control the Kyuubi from Killer Bee.

I have to admit I didn't know what a citadel was and had to look it up. My vocabulary and knowledge there of is on the lacking side (.

Is Hidan dead?! Yay! I hope he is lol. Is that terrible?
Hazel Roses chapter 14 . 10/15/2014
So I totally sung the lyrics instead of reading them. That's one of my favorite songs my Metallica. Enter the Sandman! *strums air guitar feverishly*

You know, you don't really think of how scary Sasori is until you read something like this. He literally wants to scrape out all of her insides and turn her into a human puppet. That's some horror movie shit like Dead Silence or something. And he's so calm about it yet deeply engaged because it's something he ENJOYS doing.

Morphine? Poor Sakura has got to be out of it! I hope Gaara can find her in time! I'm also wonderig who this newcomer is that's shrouded in mystery.
Hazel Roses chapter 13 . 10/14/2014
Poor Sakura! The last person she should be facing is a crazed Juugo. I had forgotten all about Kimimaru! In the anime, only he and Sasuke could calm his urges right? BAM! There it is right there. This story has been reminding me of a lot of parts in the original Naruto that I had forgotten.

I hope Suigetsu makes what I was thinking right before the avenger came in and knocked Hidan off of him. Hidan shouldn't follow Kabuto's actions. When Kabuto poked the bear, Hidan killed him. Now Hidan is poking the bear, and I hope the same happens to him.

Sakura was nice to Jugo for only stepping on his junk once. I would have continued to stop the hell out of them. Then again, I know she was just trying to subdue him and defend herself without hurting him.

Gaara's speech when he's talking to Deidara doesn't really sound like him to me. He sounds OOC. I read the dialogue in the character's voice when something sounds a bit off and that's how I usually tell. It's technically not a crime, but perhaps forewarning to the readers in your first chapter that he's a bit OOC. If you did that already and I missed it, sorry!

First, I can't take Deidara seriously why he says eat my play doh lol. I don't know, that seemed like it was meant to be funny, but based on the current situation and the whole dark vibe of the story, it didn't really fit and was a bit awkward. Also if Gaara has just pinned him down, how was Deidara able to backhand him? Especially if Gaara has him pinned on his stomach like he did before he almost got loose the first time.

Orochimaru on the other hand is absolutely perfect! I could definitely hear him grtting into the cat and mouse (well snake and mouse lol) mindset. I could definitely here the "come out, come out, wherever you are" in is silky yet diabolical voice.
Hazel Roses chapter 12 . 10/14/2014
I don't know why Kabuto thought he'd be able to talk his way out of getting killed by a lunatic like Hidan. Pissing him off didn't seem like a smart idea from the beginning, even if it was in hopes of stalling to create a plan. Oh well, good riddance Head Doctor.

That last line as Suigetsu was leaving Kabuto's body was what made the scene chilling. I could picture him lying in a pool of his own blood, glasses broken in half, and that glassy, lifeless expression in his wide eyes. Very creepy.

So Suigetsu isn't bad after all. I like how much he cares about Juugo in this one. In the anime, the all of course seem to gravitate more to Sasuke, but I like that that's not the case here even though he does care about Sasuke too. And when Hidan popped out, I was like "oh shit!" too like I'm in the story lol.

Sakura is really out of shape if her legs and lungs are screaming after barely running anywhere lol. that adrenaline rushing through her body should have helped with that too.

OMG you pretty much said what I was saying in my last PM to you! About how rapists have no set description you can put in a box and go "okay he's a rapist". Sakura's thoughts about Kabuto were spot on!
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