Reviews for Eternity Games
celajwhitney chapter 29 . 11/8/2019
edward violated their privacy twice ? he needs to die!
celajwhitney chapter 12 . 11/8/2019
no, i would never forgive her.
Cavelenare chapter 12 . 6/10/2019
MarshMALLOWS
Jesus F. Christ. Microsoft word has autocorrect! Totally done with this
Cavelenare chapter 8 . 6/10/2019
Should HAVE not should of
Would HAVE not would of
Could HAVE not could of...
It’s so simple. I’m not sure why anyone would get something so incorrect repeatedly.
SHOULD’VE short for should HAVE not “of”
It’s really disturbing to read the mistake over and over and over again.
celajwhitney chapter 25 . 5/26/2019
Edward has totally lost the plot if he thinks Bella will let him even touch her. she's a fully mated vampire and does not want him! and jasper will rip his dick off.
celajwhitney chapter 22 . 5/26/2019
do vampires not know how to knock on a door? or that a closed bedroom door means the occupants want privacy?
celajwhitney chapter 21 . 5/26/2019
why don't they call the volturi? isn't it against the law to turn children?
celajwhitney chapter 18 . 5/26/2019
their all vampires for god's sake and will live forever.! why are they so impatient to here bella's story?
crystal the optimist chapter 3 . 3/29/2019
"Good...now tell me who the fuck you ran into? It better not be my bitch ex-wife!

At first I liked this one better than the last. But it seems impossible for Jasper to be written respectfully in your world. A gentleman would never call someone he'd loved a bitch, and no matter how much you dislike someone else's intellectual property (ie Alice) does not give you the right to sh*t all over it. Have some respect.
Kristina777 chapter 39 . 3/1/2019
It was a very well written story. I love the Major and Bella together. Thank you for sharing.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 34 . 11/19/2018
It's actually very funny.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 24 . 11/19/2018
Killing her would have been much more humane.
MiccaF chapter 38 . 11/10/2018
I love this more every time I read it!
srw601 chapter 39 . 8/6/2018
Amazing story
CoSmO333 chapter 39 . 7/27/2018
this was a wild ride love this thanks for sharing
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