|Reviews for Blind Faith|
| Elda Aranel chapter 49 . 3/6
Very fun to read and it's got some great lines that just cracked me up. Especially the whole protect the wand from Petunia. The Snape/Petunia match is a different twist but you wrote it out to work really well. I hope you update again.
| Hoppy159 chapter 14 . 2/19
Wow, this chapter really brassed me off, Specifically, Dumbledore! I was pissed at the first chapter when he denied Harry the care necessary to restore his sight. Now I'm even more angry he gifted a Potter family heirloom to Neville. Obviously, he is discounting Harry totally, due to his disability. And he is using Neville as the backup to the prophecy. The only advantage I can see to this situation is with his attention off Harry, and being unaware of Harry's true capabilities because Harry kept them a secret. it will allow Harry to train and learn without too much interference.
| GBTtown chapter 49 . 2/11
First BIG mistake! Mss. Norris is still petrified! Looking at the age of this fic I bet there was a real shout out about that error.
Great story! Though, I was wondering, is English your first language? Some of your spelling errors don't make a lot of sense.
Also, should you write more HP stories, I sincerely hope you do if this story is any indication, there are some excellent resources available for spelling and definition.
| GrammerPolice chapter 42 . 2/1
I would just like to say real quick that the grammer correction Severus made about it being
"Harry and I, not me and Harry" was incorrect because if you were to say the sentence without Harry's name then "a pack of dementors came at me" is better than that of "a pack of dementors came at I"
ps...I'm joking about the name, that's just something I have always heard teachers correct in my school
| Inscriffany2 chapter 43 . 1/13
As a point of interest, the phrase is "All and sundry", not "all unsundry". There are several other misspellings/typos (in this chapter as well as others) that are starting to detract from the rest of the story. I'm honestly really impressed overall by your writing aside from that; I had never given thought to how someone with a vision impairment would type. Do you use a Braille keyboard (I have no idea if such a thing exists) or speech-to-text?
I do have one complaint, and as it's your story and your plot, there's not much I can do about it, but did you have to make Kingsley a bad guy? I mean, it could have been Dawlish or Proudfoot. They were under Fudge's thumb, sure, and Kingsley answered to Fudge and Dumbledore, but ultimately he was on Harry's side. Ugh. I just hate disliking Shacklebolt because I really like him in the books.
| ravenienne chapter 48 . 1/7
I really hope this story hasn't been abandoned... again! It's one of my favorites!
| elfwitch42 chapter 49 . 1/2
When are you going to update? I just reread your fic and it's really godd. Please update soon
| Guest chapter 49 . 12/31/2013
just a small correction for this chapter. How could they see Mrs. Norris if the cat is petrified?
| Guest chapter 49 . 12/15/2013
You haven't dropped this fic, have you? It's been a year since you updated...
| aptteach123 chapter 49 . 12/13/2013
Hey - I love your fic! It is great. I notice you haven't updated in over a year, though. Are you planning on continuing this story? I certainly hope so. I can't wait to see what will happen next, when they got caught, because I am sure that Severus will figure it out.
| ravenienne chapter 49 . 12/11/2013
Excellent so far! I'm so glad this story was continued once xyvortex left it. Please update soon!
| Magpie bullen chapter 42 . 10/23/2013
Snaps is wrong. It IS Harry and me.
| jayleaf1 chapter 49 . 10/14/2013
Run, run for your lives! Lol
| mewtwosangel chapter 49 . 10/10/2013
Mrs Norris is petrified
| mightya chapter 47 . 10/5/2013
Amazing story! Update soon please! :D