I thought this was a wonderfully touching little story. Great work!

I love this story and the fact that you wrote it so well without dialouge amazes me. You really captured Sheldon and Penny's relationship and actions here and I truly enjoyed reading this story.

Beautifully done. It's just as important to know where to stop, and you did that perfectly.

Oh my god, that was fantastic. That is WAAAAY better than a lot of Shenny fics. This writing style really suits you!

Lovely.

Very well done.

No Leonard being snarky.

Just Penny and Sheldon. All they need is each other.

Rate: A

If there hadn't been a disclaimer I wouldn't of thought that you were new at this format of writing. You didn't force any of the characters to far out of their usual ways to create a closeness between Sheldon and Penny. I await other stories to come from you in the future.

p.s. you absolutely didn't fail

Wow, I loved it. The fact that you had no dialogue actually made it better - I can't think of how you would have written something like this with dialogue.

beautiful... captured characters beautifully

Wow, I actually really liked this style without dialogue. I didn't think I would but it actually worked really well. You have a great writing style and a good way with words. Well done :)

this is truly great!

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I absolutely adore this. I don't mind fics with dialogue, but this one reminded me how much I truly love a dialogue-less fic when it's really well written. I think you did an amazing job.

I'ts Great , specially the end , it is . . . so Natural and plausible
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Awesome

Dude... WOW... It's all i can say. i got a bit teary-eyed when Meemaw died. :( I don't know why but death is a sensitive topic to me. GREAT FIC! :) I hope you post more fics like this. :D

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This is amazing, I love it! I wasn't sure how I'd feel reading a story without any kind of dialogue, but you honestly don't need it. Their behavior says way more than their words ever could! I'm adding this to my favorites, fantastic job!