Reviews for ToDo Lists
Guest chapter 2 . 12/4/2016
need more insanity agh ha ha ha mmm madness (licks lips)
DarkEcoFreak chapter 2 . 10/21/2012
Please do more! I want to see one for Jak! That was VERY FUNNY!
dante0085 chapter 2 . 4/3/2012
OMG crew in skin tights of to hell to burn image out of head
lrx chapter 2 . 4/3/2012
U wonder too Jak ?
Guest chapter 2 . 4/3/2012
Funny
ratchetthecutestlombax chapter 2 . 2/4/2012
Please continue I really love this story its funny
Dark demon619 chapter 2 . 9/26/2010
Hehe, Jinx is gona have hell to pay soon I can just tell, But this is great man, the moment I read "huge pile of meat in green." I started to feel sorry for Dax's eyesight.

I really hope you contiue this soon.
THE REPO MAN chapter 2 . 7/5/2010
lol, next do jak, or keira. -

testify
Jaslen chapter 2 . 6/22/2010
HA this was hilarious especially with Jinx and Torn

LOVE IT
Jaklin Winters chapter 2 . 6/19/2010
LOL! poor daxter.

something blew up! O_O ooooh pretty lookie at the colors.

(jaklin gets and evil idea and runs off)

... Oh shit have to go good job!
kat chapter 2 . 6/18/2010
Burn the tape!(laughs hysterically) Please do continue!
Evil Ottsel chapter 2 . 6/17/2010
Not bad. It had some good laughs in there.

Did you base Krew's fighting outfit off of that one picture of him? If so, that's really clever.
Team Redness chapter 1 . 6/17/2010
this is great x) i love it
NightMelody181 chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
Nice work looks like Dax is getting back at Torn for sending him and Jak on all those missions keep up the good work
Fred chapter 1 . 5/24/2010
Hilarious update soon!
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