I think every couple of years i read this again. perhpas i should print it, such a great story. i will teach my girlfriend how to read in english so she can read thi. thanks like always

This is one of the firts Naomily stories I read. Forgot how amazing it was. I know you probably arent going to read this but I just wanted to thank you for this! It is one of my favorites on here :3

Very good

oh my god i cant believe i jut read this for the second time, after like 4 years, it was nice to read it on my birthday week, i love it again, thanks for this girl

I've not been reviewing chapters individually because you wrote this so long and I don't know if you'll even get this, but I have to say: this story is incredible.

I got right off that the flickers were a parallel universe / what could have happened /what should have happened. I don't say that to brag, just that the idea makes complete sense to me. I didn't guess the soul mates piece, but it fits, perfectly.

So, why did I think this was incredible? A brilliant original concept, a fresh take on familiar scenes (and from a different perspective), some new backstory ... all written with some delightful humour. But more importantly, you made me feel what the characters were feeling. I shivered with Naomi on that roof top, I was expectant for yet resigned to the flickers, I could feel the connection between the girls ... top-notch writing.

Oh, and the epilogue was perfect. And the flirting and fluff, once they finally got together, was adorable. I loved every moment of it.

I'm very much looking forward to your next sorry.

I loved this story.
I admit it was quite confusing as it went on. made me frustrated at times, but i plowed on.
I like how you did this. it was really intriguing.
The part where Katie and Effy are both drunk. I have never laughed so much, especially at Katie's drunken rant. It was hilarious. Although, I always pictured her as a mean drunk.
But, I loved this story.
Just the Naomily banter made me smile and you got the jist of it great. The chemistry and everything just fit perfect. It really was like Skins but written down ;)
great job!

wow for hating the roof and those tough scenes you sure did write all these parts beautifully. you can feel every ounce of pain, uncertainty and anguish naomi is goin through. I can't wait to keep reading more...who am I kidding, I'm not going to wait I'm going to do it now! haha

Just perfection :)

Nooooo why Katie and Naomi that's just not right! Great story though

im loving this story already, i love the mystery to it. cant wait to find out where this goes

Oh, I forgot. I just saw in your profile that you're a Norweigian. I was actually planning in learning Norsk. Any tips?

There will be always be an issue in regards to Keffy seeing as Katie used to go gaga over boys. Or is it just my wishful thinking? I'm a Keffy fan though just a thought... Anyhow, not making any sense here...

Aside from the steamy scene, I am very pleased with how you elegantly made Naomily to each other that they're 'it'.

I will miss this. Thank you.

P.S.

FF won't let me comment...anyway, I love the epilogue. Though it kept me thinking why they (Keffy) separated in the first place? Maybe the sixth of Effy that they're not as strong as Naomily? Was wondering about what the rest of the gang (particularly Cook) were doing. Over all, it was a satisfying and memorably ending...and of course, story. Thank you very much!

There will be always be an issue in regards to Keffy seeing as Katie used to go gaga over boys. Or is it just my wishful thinking? I'm a Keffy fan though just a thought... Anyhow, not making any sense here...

Aside from the steamy scene, I am very pleased with how you elegantly made Naomily to each other that they're 'it'.

I will miss this. Thank you.

You're Dr. Snipes! haaha

Gina you're a genius. I never thought Emily would be angry over that silly misunderstanding. If maybe it's another girl she could have confronted Katie or Naomi or even the girl. But since it was her twin so maybe...? Anyway, it was very sweet that part wherein Naomi said she knows Emily and goes on telling her different things about her.

Thank you.