Reviews for originsofDA
Catnip-Packet chapter 2 . 7/5/2010
BWAHAHAHA! This totally made me laugh out loud. Keep it up!
MTchic51 chapter 2 . 5/28/2010
lol haha "I want chocolate cake!" keep writing this is very entertaining and interesting xD
Without Reprieve chapter 2 . 5/25/2010
Hmmm. I'm not sure what to think of this chapter. It's kind of humorous, actually. :3
Random-StoryKeeper chapter 2 . 5/24/2010
Ha ha ha...that was hilarious, even if it barely made sense! I love how you are twisting Dark Ace's name completely around and making him look like a brat!

Underwaterwriter
Without Reprieve chapter 1 . 5/22/2010
A little short, but not too shabby. Not many Dark Ace origins stories begin with him as a Cyclonian. :3
Willowbranch chapter 1 . 5/22/2010
This is going to be on weird story. Continue my friend
MTchic51 chapter 1 . 5/22/2010
i love Dark Ace stories and i like to see people's POVs/stories about the Dark Ace's past. Kepp going ! this is interesting and i wanna read more!
Random-StoryKeeper chapter 1 . 5/21/2010
No way, my friend.

Why? Why?

Don't forget to capitalize names, like Cyclonia and Dark Ace.

But do continue; I want to see where this is going (?)

Underwaterwriter