|Reviews for With You I Am|
| chymom chapter 8 . 8/20/2011
Very good;! Love the honesty in this one. On to the next.
| wishingformorewishes chapter 8 . 7/23/2011
OH DEVON. YOU MADE ME CRY AGAIN. NOW MY MOM THINKS I'M A FREAK.
LOL I'm serious though. But that was SO CUTE OH MY GOODNESS. :D ADORABLE. You are such an a AMAZING WRITER. AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING. Keep writing! :D
| rizzledindigochaser5582 chapter 8 . 2/21/2011
No! Crap the story is over :(
ABSOLUTELY LOVED the ending! "Teresa Lisbon, will you be my Forever and Always?"
I couldn't help but grin like an idiot reading that :P
Awe I promise ring,never heard of them before but what a sweet gesture!
You should be so proud of this story, I'm so proud of you for writing such an extraordinary story 3 Love youu! xxxx
| rizzledindigochaser5582 chapter 7 . 2/21/2011
aha That nurse is in for it now xD
This was proper amazing! Lol I sound like I'm repeating myself every review (which you're probably sick of by now) but its the truth! This story is extraordinary ;)
I'm glad Lisbon is gonna be okay now!
Keep writing! 333
| rizzledindigochaser5582 chapter 6 . 2/21/2011
No NOT LISBON!
This was so good and so sad! I dont want Lisbon to die, those two need to be together! :)
Aha I'll take a wild guess about you and Lauren PMing while you sleep...time differences? :P
Keep writing! You know I love this! 3333
| rizzledindigochaser5582 chapter 5 . 2/21/2011
Ahh this was SO Good!
Oooh intense last scene there, it was amazingly written though! I really enjoyed it
Ehe I can't wait for the next chapter, I'm loving this story! 333
| rizzledindigochaser5582 chapter 4 . 2/21/2011
GAH! Not the tree, NOT the tree! :O .
Sheesh this was awesome! THA-That cliffhanger-WOW!
aha I could just imagine Rigsby picking up the bottle, something tells me even if she didnt crash her car, he wouldn't have mentioned anything to Hightower :)
The poor team getting on her bad side, I'm glad someone noticed what she was doing though:)
Keep writing, I'm totally loving this story:) 33333
| rizzledindigochaser5582 chapter 3 . 2/21/2011
aha "Yes!" *bobs head up and down*
This was so great! Loved this chapter also, damn now I'm hungry! That breakfast would be so good right now, considering I havne't had anything to eat yet .
I actually really liked where Jane got angry with her, it was so amazingly written :)
Hmm although you've written ahead, I think she might get back to work...ignore jane a little more until she realises that she needs help when she starts snapping at everyone!
aha lame theory I guess! :P
Keep writing while I keep reading! 3333
| rizzledindigochaser5582 chapter 2 . 2/21/2011
Aww this chapter was sad, but brilliant! I'm glad I watched your video now _
So sad that Tommy died and the way you wrong it made it sadder (a good sad of course!)
I really enjoyed the opening scene, hehe wonder why? :P Aha yeah but it was really special! If only that really happened! we're free to imagine and fantasize though, right? :)
Can't wait to read more!
| rizzledindigochaser5582 chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
This was SO Good.
How do you right so amazingly? This was so believable and I loved the way you potrayed Lisbon at the counsellors session...it was proper funny! xD
Jane is one wiseass, ain't he? :P But you wrote him perfectly too! I felt so bad for Lisbon in the last paragraph, but I guess she shouldv'e gotten all the drink out of the house but still...she didn't want her life to end!:D :) She wanted Jane :)
I wanna read more! aha :)
| Mentalgal chapter 8 . 12/13/2010
Awww... Beautiful. Great Job!
| Mentalgal chapter 7 . 12/13/2010
Love that last sentence!
She had a reason. And that reason was patrick jane
| Mentalgal chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
Wow nice! A drinking problem, great idea!
| 00tiva0jisbon00 chapter 7 . 7/20/2010
You were right! In a review reply you told me that if I like that story I might like two of your other stories, and low and behold, I do! They are great, even if they are sad. Continue writing, cause it's fantastic.
| Koezh chapter 8 . 7/12/2010
I apologize for the really late review, the laptop crashed :( but I'm here now and what a great couple of chapters! Sad its over but the ending was brilliant and its awesome everything worked out in the end :) such a sweet ending to a great story :)