|Reviews for May's Farting Problem|
| Gracie chapter 9 . 7/3
I agree do something that involves something about hanging out not pokemon trainers and pokemon farting and burping becuz on the farting u make them feel sad then happy then sad and on the burping u made meloetta put icing in her private part and it was sputtering everywhere
| A chili eater chapter 18 . 4/26
I know you lke to write about farts, but dont you think it's time to upgrade to real full blown scat? I'd like to see some poke character taking a random diarrhea shit, like in a poke center or somwthing. You could even right about a 2 girls 1 cup scenario(May and Dawn would fit well with that)
Plz stop with the cheap farts...and just get to the real good shit.
| smashgunner chapter 16 . 4/18
10 guy: yes
| NewBrunswickXNovaScotia chapter 4 . 1/4
You could say that May's farts sound like trumpets, since this IS Hoenn, after all...
| NewBrunswickXNovaScotia chapter 2 . 1/4
Wait, Max is reading a PORNO magazine? But isn't he, like, 7? That's not very good for him, you know...
| NewBrunswickXNovaScotia chapter 1 . 1/4
I have a theory that this takes place after Ash has defeated the first seven Hoenn Gyms, because he says "I can't wait to get the eighth badge!", so at that point he's training up for Wallace/Juan's Gym.
| Supersilver46 chapter 1 . 12/13/2014
you sir have a great sense of humor... NOT! This is the second terrible that clearly shows you suck at writting.
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/7/2014
LOL what the f*** possessed you to write this story!?
| Guest chapter 9 . 7/4/2014
| Jillian chapter 6 . 5/1/2013
| Aochider chapter 3 . 7/31/2012
Interesting...I believe? It has been an okay hilarity...
| Anon chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
Oh god, my eyes are tearing up from laughter. I can't wait to see what Meowth does to May. XP
| goodman2 chapter 1 . 5/22/2010
I can't wait for the next chapter.