Reviews for May's Farting Problem
cooper chapter 2 . 11/23
after Jessie and James blasted of May and Max got along again and Ash and Brock came over there. May went back to the tent and said she did not feel good. Ash, Brock, and Max came to see what was wrong but right when they got there. She blasted her trumpet so loud and gross it feinted groudon
timothy.allen.906 chapter 26 . 4/5
Now THAT is torture! lol! Serves them right for always trying to steal pokemon..
timothy.allen.906 chapter 22 . 4/5
ANIMAL CROSSING!? wow... I wonder whats next.
timothy.allen.906 chapter 21 . 4/5
LOL! RUN AWAY! *ZOING*
timothy.allen.906 chapter 20 . 4/5
LOL! Reading Arceus' reaction to everything makes me Giggle.
timothy.allen.906 chapter 18 . 4/5
Spontaneous ME.. Classic!
timothy.allen.906 chapter 13 . 4/5
love the Prince Ali reference!
timothy.allen.906 chapter 11 . 4/5
Lol Pikachu needs more lines anyway.
timothy.allen.906 chapter 6 . 4/5
Fourth wall Down!
Totally not ULG chapter 9 . 11/29/2015
Dude thx for making this fan fiction. There are a lot of people who have fart fetishs.
Gracie chapter 9 . 7/3/2015
I agree do something that involves something about hanging out not pokemon trainers and pokemon farting and burping becuz on the farting u make them feel sad then happy then sad and on the burping u made meloetta put icing in her private part and it was sputtering everywhere
A chili eater chapter 18 . 4/26/2015
I know you lke to write about farts, but dont you think it's time to upgrade to real full blown scat? I'd like to see some poke character taking a random diarrhea shit, like in a poke center or somwthing. You could even right about a 2 girls 1 cup scenario(May and Dawn would fit well with that)

Plz stop with the cheap farts...and just get to the real good shit.
Smashgunner chapter 16 . 4/18/2015
Fart?

10 guy: yes
NewBrunswickXNovaScotia chapter 4 . 1/4/2015
You could say that May's farts sound like trumpets, since this IS Hoenn, after all...
NewBrunswickXNovaScotia chapter 2 . 1/4/2015
Wait, Max is reading a PORNO magazine? But isn't he, like, 7? That's not very good for him, you know...
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