Reviews for Balance
Blueberry Babe chapter 23 . 21h
Excellent! Thank you very much. Very unique.
Guest chapter 23 . 11/28/2020
Shame on you for not maintaining the quality of the work, after all the other chapters were so good. I am disappointed that this last chapter was a complete waste of time, and it was exceedingly long and boring, too.
Guest chapter 21 . 11/28/2020
Thanks for explaining where the song originated. I knew I'd never read this story in the past, and yet the song was familiar, so I was a bit confused till I read your notes. Marvelous job with the ritual.
Guest chapter 17 . 11/28/2020
Hartwell potion is expensive, but still much cheaper than medicated eye drops in the United States.
Guest chapter 14 . 11/28/2020
Yikes!
Guest chapter 12 . 11/28/2020
I love this conversation and these characters.
Guest chapter 11 . 11/28/2020
The pacing is breathtaking.
Guest chapter 10 . 11/28/2020
Wow.
Guest chapter 9 . 11/28/2020
Every chapter is interesting and fun, nicely written drama and suspense, a good mystery/ adventure, and I grin at the end of each chapter when you set up a cliffhanger. During the 2020 pandemic and the Trump/Biden post election lawsuits I appreciate the entertainment more than ever.
Guest chapter 3 . 11/27/2020
Trelawney is Amazing. I am delighted by the creativity of this story.
mworth1019 chapter 23 . 4/6/2020
Very nice story, funny and strange but really loved the togetherness and how they all worked together to succeed. Loved how even Riddle even helped... great
flower pot girl chapter 23 . 11/9/2019
A brilliant story with unexpected twist and turns.
I loved the way things changed and they all work together to replace the wards.
Guest chapter 23 . 12/30/2018
Extremely long, tedious, hideously boring final 2 chapters makes me wonder if the exciting first author died and someone else wrote this bit.
Guest chapter 18 . 12/29/2018
Sweet!
Guest chapter 15 . 12/29/2018
Ah, a mystery.
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