Reviews for Balance
Guest chapter 23 . 12/30/2018
Extremely long, tedious, hideously boring final 2 chapters makes me wonder if the exciting first author died and someone else wrote this bit.
Guest chapter 18 . 12/29/2018
Sweet!
Guest chapter 15 . 12/29/2018
Ah, a mystery.
Guest chapter 14 . 12/29/2018
Yikes! OMG, I feel cold chills and goosebumps on my arms, and a shiver down my back like someone walked over my grave.
Guest chapter 10 . 12/29/2018
Now you've got me scared! Still exciting, just in a different way.
Guest chapter 9 . 12/29/2018
Cliffhanger! ha
Guest chapter 8 . 12/28/2018
I don't think they are in Kansas. lol
Guest chapter 6 . 12/28/2018
This is very charming, and makes me smile a lot as the suspense builds and the students start working together.
Guest chapter 5 . 12/28/2018
Good suspense!
Guest chapter 2 . 12/28/2018
LOL
Guest chapter 1 . 12/28/2018
Very good dramatic writing here in ch.1.
Dixie.f.9 chapter 23 . 8/10/2018
Well they made it back but was it to their world?
Jaxsprat chapter 1 . 6/10/2018
beautiful!
Guest chapter 23 . 4/21/2018
Fantastic and original ideas. Re ageing/de-ageing, the dead returning, the magic of children's rhymes, the dancers in the expanding reel. Lovely.
SusanMarieS chapter 13 . 8/27/2017
LOL! aww man.
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