Reviews for Balance
Guest chapter 14 . 12/29/2018
Yikes! OMG, I feel cold chills and goosebumps on my arms, and a shiver down my back like someone walked over my grave.
Guest chapter 10 . 12/29/2018
Now you've got me scared! Still exciting, just in a different way.
Guest chapter 9 . 12/29/2018
Cliffhanger! ha
Guest chapter 8 . 12/28/2018
I don't think they are in Kansas. lol
Guest chapter 6 . 12/28/2018
This is very charming, and makes me smile a lot as the suspense builds and the students start working together.
Guest chapter 5 . 12/28/2018
Good suspense!
Guest chapter 2 . 12/28/2018
LOL
Guest chapter 1 . 12/28/2018
Very good dramatic writing here in ch.1.
Dixie.f.9 chapter 23 . 8/10/2018
Well they made it back but was it to their world?
Jaxsprat chapter 1 . 6/10/2018
beautiful!
Guest chapter 23 . 4/21/2018
Fantastic and original ideas. Re ageing/de-ageing, the dead returning, the magic of children's rhymes, the dancers in the expanding reel. Lovely.
SusanMarieS chapter 13 . 8/27/2017
LOL! aww man.
MarbleWolf chapter 23 . 7/31/2017
This will probably be the longest review I will ever leave for a story. Your story at first was strange. And it still is, but I must commend you! You have written the most unique, amazing, extraordinary story I've ever read! It was so weird and made me laugh and gasp! I am IN LOVE with this story. In only 23 chapters, you've climbed your way up to my top 5. Which is a feat! I usually only favor long stories. Again I commend you!
Andante825 chapter 23 . 12/10/2016
What an original and beautifully written concept! The characters aging and de-aging, the dead appearing, the rituals (especially jump rope songs) - I loved this work. Wish I'd found it ten years ago.
Readerjkr chapter 23 . 10/6/2016
Epic.
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