Reviews for Balance |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! I loved the Snape and Lupin scene and I especiallyloved McGonagall's transformation. SO CUTE! Encore! Encore! However, I have one question. It might be stupid, but here we go. What does this mean: "“Do you really want to walk halfway ‘round the castle to find out that it hasn’t? Helga’s sett?”" Sorry, but it just didn't make sense to me... Anyway, good chapter. can't wait for the next one of this and your other one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is coming along great- and this chapter was excellent! I loved the clever and unique ways you used to bring everyone down in age. I loved Filch. And I really thought it was sweet how Harry and Draco flattered McGonagall down through the years. Aw, of course Harry's going to think of the cupboard... |
![]() ![]() Aaaaah! Aaaaah! Aaaah! *runs around in circles screaming* An update, an update! After all this time - I'd almost given up ... ;) Thanks for the new chapter ... and hurry! Hurry, hurry, hurry! Erm ... please? |
![]() ![]() Aaaaah! Aaaaah! Aaaah! *runs around in circles screaming* An update, an update! After all this time - I'd almost given up ... ;) Thanks for the new chapter ... and hurry! Hurry, hurry, hurry! Erm ... please? |
![]() ![]() ![]() You're doing a lovely job...I love how you ended the chapter. It had that cliff-hanger feel, but it was more hopeless and sad than anything. Nicely done :) -Dahl |
![]() ![]() ![]() Riveting. If one had to describe this is one word, that would be the word. This is one of the best Harry Potter fanfics I have ever read. Your other stuff had me in tears earlier, well, tears of laughter... please, please, please keep it up! K.S. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dear Heavens! I can't recall the last fic that sucked me in and wouldn't let me go until I'd finished the whole thing in one sitting. You should see my posture... As each chapter got more and more tense, I kept hunching further over the mousepad, leaning toward the monitor screen to drag in the words... This is just incredible! The whole thing about the age shifting and the magic siphoning away has just got me enraptured! I think this is one of the most suspenseful fics I've ever read and I can hardly wait to see what happens next! Thank you so much for sharing this particular vision of the Potterverse! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, reality storms. Badly done, they're horrid. Well done-and this one is-they're lovely and frightening. It's been some time since I was so pleased with a reality storm story; thank you! I'm looking forward to more. |
![]() ![]() Wow! I've read your "Another Snape meets the Dursleys" story and thoroughly enjoyed that, but this one is definitely something else! Extremely well-written and the concept and plot is very original - I haven't read anything this original for a long time actually, and I've been gobbling up HP fanfics the last couple of months. I'll be keeping my eyes out for updates on this one especially! Keep up the excellent work and thank you for sharing. |
![]() ![]() OH MY GOODNESS! You seriously have no idea how good this story is! I mean, I know you wrote it and everything, but perhaps you are too close to it to realize just how AMAZINGLY STUPENDUOUSLY TERRIFIC this story is! I mean, WOW! (Yes I know I'm using excessive amounts of punctuation and caps, but I believe the situation calls for it :) I really, truly can't wait for the next chapter! You are such a good writer! Seriously! |
![]() ![]() I liked "shortcut" very much. And... verewolf's afraid of cats? Funny. Thanks. Good chapter, really. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm really loving this story, and I'm glad you haven't neglected to finish it... ~Wolfie Jr~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hoooray! A new chapter! I loved the scene where they caught the runaway Door! And Harry's description of Filch climbing him like a ladder! (Why doesn't the time-slippage affect Filch like the others? Is that one of the spells that Squibs are immune to, or do you have a different reason in mind?)Yes, Filch always does try to say "please" and "thank you" to the Doors. I also really liked the "shortcut" remark. And Filch's reaction to the sight of Cedric. That Healwell Salve is expensive stuff! I liked the way that everyone was concerned about making sure that it was used on the most needy. Poor Flitwick... hope he's going to be okay! Awww! Little Lupin is so cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So Filch isn't affected because he's a squib huh? Interesting. This was a good chapter. Well written and interesting. The potion stuff was cool and you wrote Filch really well. Cheers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OK - curioser and curioser, but I'm having a lot of fun falling down this "rabbit" hole. Is Filch not changing age because he's a squib? And why did McGonegall go through "a good bit" of what she drank "a few years back"? Moment that broke my heart - Remus calling Harry James. |