Reviews for Nature of Love |
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Sarah Amin chapter 18 . 12/6/2013 Carlisle is a piece of work ! |
Sarah Amin chapter 14 . 12/6/2013 Scratch that , both Garrett and Charlie are my favorites :D |
Sarah Amin chapter 13 . 12/6/2013 my favorite character so far has been Charlie .. They're all infallible but Charlie somehow seems perfect .. |
Sarah Amin chapter 4 . 12/6/2013 i'm confused .. Did jerry violate her ? but wasnt there another ass whom her mother dated that snuck into her room when she was 13 .. Renee deserved to die miilions of times over for both accounts .. |
Twilightfanatic85 chapter 23 . 12/2/2013 Great story! I loved it! Great job! D |
Smusic F. Reader chapter 12 . 11/30/2013 I haven't reviewed much while reading this story because each chapter, I couldn't pause long enough to stop. I have to say though, that I think your writing of Bella's reaction was spot on for this chapter. She finally listened to Edward, but she didn't fall into his arms and forgive him right away. There were other ways to handle this, she is right. Hell, they could have even involved Charlie in the protection of Bella. So I think her asking for more time is the right thing to do. He needs to earn her trust. |
lamelurker chapter 23 . 11/27/2013 Thank you for writing and sharing your story! I enjoyed it! |
Jenna Red chapter 23 . 11/17/2013 If, your mind is made up about writing a sequel...would you consider the same storie from Alice and Jasper's point of view? I really want to know more about what they went through and how they experienced the AT. If its out of the question, so be it. Thank you again for this amazing story (I have read it twice now) and good luck with whatever you are working on at the moment. **Jenna |
NarciCC chapter 23 . 10/30/2013 I fell so in love with this AMAZINGLY BRILLIANT story, WOW! Every chapter had me on the edge of either love, heartbreak, happiness or something esle '-) *cold shower and tissues* I can't express how much I really really loved this story. After all the termoil they went through, their love and patience is was let them breathe and survivie. Thank you so much for sharing and giving us the opportunity to enjoy it. If any sequal or outtakes on them ever come to mind, please please send them our way to read. YOU ROCK! Narcy ;-D |
lillianolivia.white chapter 23 . 10/23/2013 I just loved this story. Partly because I grew up near the AT, and have hiked parts of it. But I love all your stories! Thanks so much. |
lillianolivia.white chapter 21 . 10/22/2013 This is truly a wonderful story. |
lillianolivia.white chapter 20 . 10/22/2013 I cried like a baby while Edward was sitting with Bella, making it hard to write. But I feel happiness. |
lillianolivia.white chapter 19 . 10/22/2013 You know Esme may just save Bella- & hopefully Kate can help. I'm starting to worry about Bella. And I may have been wrong about Carlisle - we may just be a piece of shit. |
lillianolivia.white chapter 18 . 10/22/2013 Oh, I have hope for Carlisle. He will have to just let go of his rigid personality. Loooove Uncle Garrett- he reminds me of Uncle Al (In Pursuit) . Love how this huge family just absorbs the girls, Jasper & Charlie. It brings a huge smile. Edward will be so happy Bella is getting him a piano. |
lillianolivia.white chapter 17 . 10/22/2013 Carlisle seems like a narrow-minded person who never was allowed as a child to explore what he really wanted. Ariana wants Edward , & Bella is right that Edward should be careful. She may have felt that she was led on. Lou is think is ok, but still cautious about him. |