Reviews for Need
Fireminer chapter 3 . 2/8/2014
Beside the fact that this is a lemon, your writing is quite nice. Good job.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
This isn't bad! Pretty good in keeping Eri's point of view. Nice development :)
My only critique is avoiding terms such as "birth canal" and another word (that I forget.) it just takes it out of the moment I think lol. Other than that this isn't bad at all! Especially for this rare pairing!
Xerzo LotCN chapter 3 . 9/18/2012
love the story amazing !
Henvdemon Of The Sun chapter 3 . 12/16/2011
Damn. That's it? I like it. Just wish there was more. You're a good writer for having me read it more than once. Please write a sequel.
Blazorna Ibara chapter 3 . 9/2/2011
This is a really great story that kept me glued to my computer screen from beginning to end. You really kept the story realistic from beginning to end. There were no grammar mistakes that I noticed and the storyline was done in a flowing manner. To quote the Prince himself to describe how much I loved this story, "F This! F for Fabulous!"

There's one thing I was wondering. are you planning on actually doing a sequel for this? If so, one possibility is that the sequel focuses more on the consequences that happens after Shiki finds out that Neku and Eri betrayed her. After how the story ends, the reader would most likely can't help but wonder how Beat, Rhyme, and their other friends will react to what happend.

I hope you keep on writing fanfics that are as good as this in the future. Whether it's TWEWY or another series, just don't stop.
HitsuMatsu831 chapter 3 . 5/13/2011

I prefer NekuxEri pairing they're too sexy for each other... can you write more about them? it may contains fluff or lemon i don't care as long as its both...hahahaha...joke but really write more about them...

love the story it's verrrrrryyyy SMEEEEEEEEEEXXXYYY...
Lemacon chapter 2 . 9/27/2010
HOLY HELL! Finally someone has made a fanfic about this rare pairing which I have only happened to spot once before discovering this. I am so grateful for all the effort you have been putting into this fanfic and I do hope you manage to get back enough of your inspiration to continue this. Oh, and probably you could make Neku more dense... you know what I'm saying. So good luck!
DustfingersChica chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
Ooo this is a very interesting and addicting fic. Update soon! :)