Reviews for Wiccan
Lizzydoll chapter 3 . 1/13
I don't mid stories where naruto is usually on the receiving end in terms of story and topping, but I do mind it when his personality is butchered/girly. I keep waiting for your naruto to smack his lips before speaking as this is the vibe he's giving off to me. I'm just one person though :] everyone else adores your story and I'm quite sure it's good. I can't finish it or continue it because of the way Naruto is portrayed, I'm sorry
YukinaUzuha chapter 16 . 10/13/2014
I just finished your story and it's awesome (:
Guest chapter 15 . 4/11/2014
This fic wasn't half bad. I wasn't sure what to expect because The Covenant is an awful movie. But you changed it enough from the movie that I was able to read it to the end without hating myself for it. But I think overall, the bare-bones plot for that movie was okay, which is what you kept, but the Naruto characters were just more likeable than the ones in that movie (and we didn't have to worry about bad acting, and Naruto and Sasuke actually had some chemistry as leads). So overall, it was an improvement on the source material. Thanks for sharing!
mariaCarla chapter 15 . 4/10/2014
Hey n_n
I just finished your fic
Wiccan is awesome
Thanks for making it
tyrant2love chapter 15 . 3/28/2014
I really like this story : D great job
xxxkinkybusinessxxx chapter 3 . 11/25/2013
Love the story. I am only on the 3rd chapter and love how you created the plot line from one of my favorite movies The Covenant!
Yuri Keiba Yaoi Freak chapter 15 . 11/24/2013
i honestly loved the whole story from beginning to end. can't wait for more sasunaru or narusasu! i think they"re perfect for each other.
Guest chapter 8 . 8/22/2013
monster comes in your room and nibbles on your ankle at night? i blame the spider! :p
Taigon Shikkin chapter 16 . 8/13/2013
You know at the end, they never did end up using that 'protection'. Just pointing that out!
Guest chapter 3 . 7/23/2013
honestly, you completely fucked up Itachi's personnality.. of all people *sigh* anyway your writing style is pretty good, some errors here and there but nothing that can't be overloooked, sice you're basing the fic on the movie, it's kind of predictable .. but still I'm kind of enjoying it :) though I would have prefered if you avoided the 'love at first sight' thing.. I would have liked some deeper chemistry btw Sasuke and Naruto .. but oh well it's still kind of good, I suppose, for the amateus of this genre .. I think i will finish this story ..hmm
YaoiTora chapter 15 . 7/22/2013
That was AWESOME! XD I loved it! Itachi and Nagato made me laugh!
Guest chapter 2 . 5/26/2013
WHOA, I LOVE IT, bad asses, xDDDD
asm613 chapter 10 . 5/9/2013
they were showered with vomit and regurgitated beer-
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this was funny- u should have had something bad happen to her every time she popped up in the story. it's not quite as fun when she is just a bitch and then she leaves
Raven Halley chapter 16 . 4/27/2013
I love story and I love the movie.
Limeru chapter 16 . 4/3/2013
I really love this FF.. And the ending was really fucking funny and hot.. Although I haven't watch the movie where this is based, I still think this really great.. Although I wish Naruto has some kind of mystical powers as well or something.. Anyway, good job! _
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