|Reviews for Victim and Assailant|
| 0-8-4 chapter 1 . 6/19/2014
| BlueDiamondStar chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
Not only this story was nice but it also solved my dictionary problem. Thanks for writing it!:)
| wotumba1 chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
plan on continuing?
| Tessa Marlene chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
This story is full of awesome. You really nailed Neal and Peter's relationship and the angst.
| KuroNekoShoujo chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
I love this story so far! Very well written, and the plot has really sucked me in! I feel awful for Neal though, the poor dear. :( But still, I hope you continue this soon!
| csimesser1 chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
that was good
| Bloodmoonspirit chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
This was really good. I'm not sure it should have been rated M though, unless you were intending to add ore violence in the next chapter. That would be good. Haha. (I'm seriously not crazy)I happen to enjoy torture. (still not crazy) Also weather it be fanfiction or original stuff I always torture the characters I like... Hmm... I could have sworn there was a point to this little rant... Oh yes: more story please. :O)
(I swear to God, I am not crazy)
-thanks for sharing. Bye, bye. :-)
| comc08 chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
please continue this story
| Crow22 chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
interesting. not sure if i liked it, but it wasn't bad. I'm too much of a Neal fan to appreciate him being in prison again
| FlapperFinzNoNames10201303 chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
Aww geez, poor Neal! I love how protective Peter is in a big brotherly way. I hope you finish this ] ~Nayah
| Ursula4x chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
Hey, I recommended this story on live journal and then forgot to feedback. I loved the gentle comfort that Peter gave and the fierce protective nature of the man.
| Stompy Bigfoot chapter 1 . 6/12/2010
ooh.. like.. love hurt!neal!
| ArchersParadox chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
Aw poor Neal, I cant wait for chapter 2
| Gloworm41 chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
Oh poor Neal - thank God he has Peter there for him. It was nice that Peter tried to protect Neal hopefully he will get him out of there soon. Please update soon.
| GingeRed chapter 1 . 5/24/2010
This story is very promising so far. I like that you show Neal so vulnerable and how Peter tries to protect him somehow. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thanx.