Reviews for Roller Coaster
vocachara chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
Awwh ! this story is sooo cutee ! i swear it's the same with my brother when we go to amusement parks. Well, excluding the whole twincest concept, which was cute here!

Vocachara :D
Bubblycutie and Awesomnessdude chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
I LOVE LOV LOV LOV LOV ROLLER COASTERS!:DDDDDDDD ITZ SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH FUN!:D LOVE THE FF!
LightSpeed Athlete24 chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
Kawaii! I agree with shole, i think rin is the more daring one...just look at the PV of Len's "World is Mine". Anyway, I loved your story! Writer's Inability? I'm sorry, but I don't believe that. You're story's awesome! How could you say you don't have an ability in writing? Hehe...great job! I look forward to more great stories! (not to pressure you or anything...hehe)
Malirra4290 chapter 1 . 5/25/2010
haha that was really cute :D

i found a couple of errors and awkward wording

but w/e :P who cares xD

u should continue writing..

like maybe a sequel? o.o

Rin and Len on bumper cars! yayy xD
shole chapter 1 . 5/24/2010
i d'awwwwwwwed. :'D i imagined Rin to be the more adventurous one.