Reviews for Oyu No Ranma |
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LlamaMathilde chapter 2 . 7/25/2010 This is very entertaining. Only on Chapter 2, still reading. |
Dumbledork chapter 8 . 7/25/2010 Excellent like always. |
Uzukami chapter 8 . 7/24/2010 Great fic, love the setting |
Crimson Yrael chapter 8 . 7/24/2010 I really, really enjoyed this chapter. Very nice length, too! The story overall has been wonderful. There are far too few stories that examine the psychological factors of Ranma's curse in detail, and you've done a fantastic job of it so far. I would I could leave some constructive criticism, but I really haven't seen anything that I feel needs to be addressed. As far as matchups go, I'm actually hoping for a matchup with Ryouga. They seem to work really well together when done correctly, and it seems like a solid foundation to work with on Ranma's gender issues. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, which I hope is soon! |
Edrik chapter 8 . 7/24/2010 I just love the little cold war you have brewing between Kasumi and Ranma! Can't say Kasumi is out of character because she hardly gets any screen time on both the manga or anime. We know she is nice, patient, and dutiful, but beyond that we are left clueless to her personal life. In other words, a lot of room to expand on her character, but enough of that. Again, I must congratulate you on another intense scene. Having Ranma and Akane in the bathroom almost kiss was just such a moving moment for me. I was practically jumping up and down from the excitement there. Call me dense, but I didn't understand that last reference at the end of the chapter. "Nabiki made eye contact with everyone in the room. "We have to stop whatever Kasumi is doing to Dr. Tofu."" I couldn't decide if I was reading too deep into that and thinking Kasumi was purposely drugging the poor doctor for her entertainment or was Nabiki just refering to what Kasumi's presence alone was doing to him. Either way I think it will end up very interesting. Another great chapter! Keep up the wonderful pace you have set for both releases and story-wise. You are doing a great job. I hope to see another chapter soon! |
InknKey chapter 8 . 7/24/2010 Another great chapter. Keep it up. |
James Birdsong chapter 8 . 7/24/2010 Nice three chapters |
HIdragon chapter 7 . 7/3/2010 Entertaining at the end A good chapter, with plot developing, and several things, such as Ranma's musings Each character was good. I did not spot any spelling errors, either, though I'm not an expert on grammar, and could not point out any issues As for the story so far.. The concept is intriguing, and the characters have their own personalities. Your plot started off with a twist from the very start and was well written, leaving me with anticipation for the next chapters. There is character development fitting in with what I could expect, not being too outrageous. You have given each some of their own quirks and it's not too hard to work out what each is like. They are lively and have personalities that catch one's eye, as well as interesting stories behind them. And they caught my attention with the interactions too P.S. Please continue with this work, and I look forward to reading more. P.P.S. this is my first more detailed review, at least for me. No attempt essay sized until its finished, but I am proud to review this. |
luger 7 chapter 7 . 6/16/2010 Guns and Roses, Dude! What a great fanfic. |
Anon chapter 7 . 6/16/2010 I was able to stay woth the story until the kiss with Kuno. Too far out of character for only a few days as a girl. |
lastgal chapter 7 . 6/15/2010 I’m really enjoying this variation of the Ranma story! I’m looking forward to the interesting relationship developments that will likely happen in the future. Please update as soon as possible. |
SOTG chapter 7 . 6/14/2010 Utterly fantastic. I can't wait to read more. One thing that should prove interesting is Ryouga's arrival. After all, it's going to look like Ranma just disappeared off the face of the earth. Added to alerts and favourites. I look forward to more! |
Kirinin chapter 7 . 6/13/2010 This is SO bloody brilliant. I can't help but notice that this story has been posted for eight years... I really hope you continue it very soon, I'm completely enthralled. You've got such a realistic Tendo family, totally believable extrapolations of their canon characterizations. Your view of Kasumi and Akane in particular is hilarious. And your Ranma! Man, you've really nailed how (s)he might feel about the issues that face him/her. I liked how Ranma thought to herself, *why NOT be kissed by Kunou?* because she wanted help deciding if she was "a lesbian" or not. Needless to say, I'm greatly enjoying this and hope you continue. -K |
ranma-chan-14 chapter 7 . 6/13/2010 Great chapter, I wonder if Ranma will be able to find a way to make Kasumi less hostile. plz update soon! - |
Talvi Noita chapter 7 . 6/12/2010 AWSOME :3 This storry is going really good so curious to see where it goes. Will Ranma admit to herself that she's a girl? Will Akane admit that she's a lesbian? Will Nabiki admit that she isn't really a heartless bitch? Or will something go wrong and they revert back to the dysfunction mess from the manga/anime. Nice to see a fic where Genma isn't a 100% waste of life too. And very few fics can make Kasumi less than angelic and have it not be soo OOC as to be laughable. Good job there :3 |