|Reviews for Paper CutOuts|
| MissingEric chapter 17 . 9/5
Finally she lays down the law
| MissingEric chapter 14 . 9/5
Then dang…. That was a sweet chapter!
| MissingEric chapter 13 . 9/5
This whole situation is so frustrating. They weren’t official but he was kissing someone else and didn’t see it as disrespectful. I doubt I could get past that. WTF did he think they were doing. That’s probably just my lack of relationships and married for 20 years brain talking. And I feel like she just lets him railroad her. Ugh!
| VryUnique chapter 22 . 7/20
Why would he think he needs to leave Bella? She doesn’t have anything there.
| VryUnique chapter 21 . 7/20
Loved ladder to the Sun. That Bella is a little like this one. I wish we had gotten the Edward & Tanya conversation towards the end.
| VryUnique chapter 20 . 7/20
Not bad for a first time. He should have went down on her and gotten her all worked up before.
| VryUnique chapter 19 . 7/20
I have 3 sisters, you learned pretty early that you don’t badmouth the boyfriends. Once you get back together and bring them around things are never the same with the parents. Bella should post happy pictures with her, Edward and Finn, Alice will come around. We never got to hear what Bella actually posted but it was obviously only the bad stuff. Lesson learned, just like my sisters and I learned.
| VryUnique chapter 18 . 7/20
| VryUnique chapter 17 . 7/20
I liked Dimples. Bella has an obsession with stories, she should write one.
| VryUnique chapter 16 . 7/19
If Edward had expressed more on the fact he didn’t want her to be drunk their first time together than maybe she would have had her little tantrum. She needs to know he sees more than them fooling around. She should know that anyway, he asked her to meet the parents.
| VryUnique chapter 15 . 7/19
If Edward never slept with that blond than she had even more nerve than I originally thought. Walking upend trying to kiss him, to obviously stake some kind of claim. I hope we get to hear what Edward said to her, I love that he went right to Bella for a kiss.
You did forget to clean Bella’s hand that was coated in warmth...
| VryUnique chapter 14 . 7/19
Awww...nice... I hope they really communicate soon.
| VryUnique chapter 13 . 7/19
Bella said her parents love her but they’re not friends, they live separate lives. Do they live together or separately? We have gotten clues that made me think Bella was unloved but she says she wasn’t. I’m trying to put together why she is like she is.
| VryUnique chapter 12 . 7/19
I think Edward said his parents died at 9 in a past chapter.
Edward should press for her story.
| VryUnique chapter 11 . 7/19
Poor Mike, Bella should have not used him like that. Bella needs to tell Edward straight out that she doesn’t want to be a flavor on his shelf.
Edward didn’t know they were exclusive? Cop out. He’s not stupid, he knows Bella is inexperienced and isn’t spreading herself around. That’s just what a guy will tell himself to justify his own actions. I suppose it’s ok to kiss all the girls you want if one girl isn’t always sleeping in your bed.