Reviews for Paper CutOuts
NoVerbalFilter chapter 5 . 6/7/2010
Another great chapter! Love Edwards character - sweet, sexy & playful. Looking forward to more of Finn & Walt & Edward drawing Bella out of her shell.
Baklava80 chapter 5 . 6/7/2010
Really enjoying this, thank u for great writing style and avoiding cliche;) also thanks for quick updates xm
readerkitty chapter 5 . 6/7/2010
This chapter has me smiling.
Raewright chapter 5 . 6/7/2010
LOL I do so enjoy these odd-couple stories you guys write!
beccasmind chapter 5 . 6/7/2010
Nah he doesn't sound like a bad guy just smooth and skilled, which Bella is not. He gets a kick out of getting a rise or shock out of her and yet is very intrigued by her very innocence. Just as she likes him for doing it. I like it, he is breaking Bella out of the mold she has placed herself in.
JBurdick chapter 5 . 6/7/2010
awesome! Again...i swear i love so much...edward is just so witty and snarky and i want his tongue in MY mouth hehe...gah
robwardsgirl chapter 5 . 6/7/2010
"My heart speeds up as if it is only now realizing that I am repeating my diversion, but repeating it makes it less of a diversion and more of a pattern. This realization gives me the courage to approach the bar."

What a brilliant way to show how tied she is to routine...and how deeply fearful she is of change.

I'm telling you girls, you have an absolute gift for dialogue. These are LIVING BREATHING people...who speak and react in such a real way. I can't thank you enough for that.

I loved the idea that Bella couldn't process what had happened between her and Edward and instead sought the advice of her "Wall." And whay I particularly loved was the fact the her "Wall" let her down. That this was the first crack in it, so to speak. That she has to face the realization that emotions, when you actually allow yourself to feel them, don't always translate. There's a reciprocity in true communication... I love that she is finding her voice a bit with Edward.

Simply awesome!
lovebel chapter 5 . 6/7/2010
I am grinning from ear to ear. I love, love your story! And again am totally curious to see where it goes, especially with control freak Bella and plain cool Edward. :)

Thank you for the update

Till next time,

Lovebel xx
AzraCullen chapter 5 . 6/7/2010
love love love it.

When u replied to my review i secretly hopes u wud post abnother chapter up soon.

I love bella, i really do. Shes awkward and real and wodnerful. Shes a real person.

Edwards a bit too cocky, and i wonder if hes playing with her feelings. He knows how much she likes him and is enjoying it, thats kinda not fair.

I love finn, lets hope bella meets him, i seriously think they cud get on great. both are so sweet and innocent.
sherryola chapter 4 . 6/6/2010
Oh, that was so sweet. i like this Edward. He's very endearing.
iwasamy chapter 4 . 6/6/2010
It seems a bit random that he would put this stranger in his bed but I'm aalllll for it :) Edward is really a big sweetheart I think and i'm loving walt lol! I loved their interaction in this chapter. Can't wait to see dome more. What a great job you're doing. I'm seriously in love with this story, I can't get it out of my head. Well done. Love it! Xxx
jermak99 chapter 4 . 6/5/2010
GAH! She's staying the night at his place? I like it! ;-)

Great chapter! Thanks so much for updating :)
Zors chapter 4 . 6/5/2010
I just love this thing already. That's all I have to say right now. The whole bit about recognizing how lonely she was-not knowing where she belonged... man they got to me, because how many times have I felt like that? I love it.
grabadietcoke chapter 4 . 6/5/2010
Oh she's such a weirdo and he's impossibly sweet to her. Love when she asked him what he did for a living, in his bar. So funny and awkward and his POV around the whole Walt thing. Cute!
Paco1230 chapter 4 . 6/5/2010
Awesome chapter! Edward is great and love his reaction to Bella. Love how Bella went in, got drunk and is crashing at his place. :) Really enjoying this story!
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