Reviews for Paper CutOuts
coldplaywhore chapter 3 . 6/2/2010
Okay this chapter was both uncomfortable and cute, so you are doing something right. I felt bad that Bella felt that she needed to exaggerate her situation with the bartender to Alice, her only sorta kinda friend / former roommate. However, the interaction with the dog, who sounds eerily like my own husband in the likes department, made up for it. Still enjoying ladies!
NoVerbalFilter chapter 3 . 6/2/2010
Eager to hear the story of Finn! Great chapter.

What kind of dog is Walt?
evasivelove chapter 3 . 6/2/2010
Ahh this is so interesting! I love it )
Raewright chapter 3 . 6/2/2010
Bella is an enigma. Edward is swoo-ny!
beccasmind chapter 3 . 6/2/2010
Well sometimes life is more interesting than fiction we can create in our minds. At least when you step outside yourself and let it be. Bella might just be learning that if she is willing to take the chance?
L5472 chapter 3 . 6/2/2010
Edward's adorable. With his flirting and pervert dog... *squees* ;)
misskaterinab chapter 3 . 6/2/2010
Walt the pervert dog is the shit. Just sayin'.
SLClark chapter 3 . 6/2/2010
Good job with this chapter. I like sassy Bella. I proud that she spoke to him!
ltlerthqak chapter 3 . 6/2/2010
Aw, your Edward was so sweet (though I would have kicked his butt for letting his dog maul me). Bella is such a...nut...and not really in a good way. I get uncomfortable just reading the way you are writing her. Lord grant her some social grace at some point, that girl is too awkward!

Loved it!
iwasamy chapter 3 . 6/2/2010
I NEED MORE! It figures that Walt would be the first to cop a feel! I really laughed at that. I'm seriously enjoying this fic and this chapter was brilliant. I can't wait for some more B/E interaction. And I can't wait to see how the rest of the gang fit in! And who's the babymomma? Can't waiiiiit! Bella seems a bit nuts making up all these wee stories about getting to know E. You're doing a great job. Thank you. Xxx
JeNnNn chapter 3 . 6/2/2010

thats awesome.

:D :D

and o0o0o at the ending ;)



lovebel chapter 3 . 6/1/2010
Thank you for the update! It was funny and sweet and I can't wait to see what happens next with interesting Bella and Barward. :)))

Lovebel xo
princess07890 chapter 3 . 6/1/2010
That was great :) I love that Edward has his eyebrow pierced...I wonder what else he has pierced? ;) hehe. Cannot wait to see what happens next :)
frlarsson chapter 3 . 6/1/2010
Loved the chapter, )

and the surprise-meeting in the park.

best wishes, Linda
outtayourface chapter 3 . 6/1/2010
Loved this chapter! It made me smile, laugh, and giggle-snort several times. I can't wait to see where you two take this. Great job so far! (Ps: did you like my silly beta comments? Lol)
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