|Reviews for Paper CutOuts|
| ssarrahh chapter 5 . 6/7/2010
I really like your Edward (i don't remember if I have already say this but I will say it again for kicks). This was a really cute chapter and you had me cracking up over Bella's awkward wake up. Next chapter is the painting date, me thinks?
| coldplaywhore chapter 5 . 6/7/2010
Her awkward fumbling when she left the apartment was classic. She makes me laugh with her unsure ways and sheer confusion. She's an enigma to say the least. I do like your bold Edward though. Good for him :)
| Wonderwallthefirst chapter 5 . 6/7/2010
I love this. She is such an idiot. Or a nerd. Either way, it's hilarious.
| gbasjw chapter 5 . 6/7/2010
Oh my this chapter was SO funny! What an odd couple...I can't wait for painting day!
| Kmserenity chapter 5 . 6/7/2010
Bella is so funny. It's like she completely lacks a verbal filter and socially awkward conversation flows out. Only to have the counterpoint of Edward who seems to choose not to acknowledge a filter and says (and does for that matter) anything he sees fit. Enjoying the dialogue very much. Thx!
| NoVerbalFilter chapter 5 . 6/7/2010
Another great chapter! Love Edwards character - sweet, sexy & playful. Looking forward to more of Finn & Walt & Edward drawing Bella out of her shell.
| Baklava80 chapter 5 . 6/7/2010
Really enjoying this, thank u for great writing style and avoiding cliche;) also thanks for quick updates xm
| readerkitty chapter 5 . 6/7/2010
This chapter has me smiling.
| Raewright chapter 5 . 6/7/2010
LOL I do so enjoy these odd-couple stories you guys write!
| beccasmind chapter 5 . 6/7/2010
Nah he doesn't sound like a bad guy just smooth and skilled, which Bella is not. He gets a kick out of getting a rise or shock out of her and yet is very intrigued by her very innocence. Just as she likes him for doing it. I like it, he is breaking Bella out of the mold she has placed herself in.
| JBurdick chapter 5 . 6/7/2010
awesome! Again...i swear i love this...so so much...edward is just so witty and snarky and i want his tongue in MY mouth hehe...gah
| robwardsgirl chapter 5 . 6/7/2010
"My heart speeds up as if it is only now realizing that I am repeating my diversion, but repeating it makes it less of a diversion and more of a pattern. This realization gives me the courage to approach the bar."
What a brilliant way to show how tied she is to routine...and how deeply fearful she is of change.
I'm telling you girls, you have an absolute gift for dialogue. These are LIVING BREATHING people...who speak and react in such a real way. I can't thank you enough for that.
I loved the idea that Bella couldn't process what had happened between her and Edward and instead sought the advice of her "Wall." And whay I particularly loved was the fact the her "Wall" let her down. That this was the first crack in it, so to speak. That she has to face the realization that emotions, when you actually allow yourself to feel them, don't always translate. There's a reciprocity in true communication... I love that she is finding her voice a bit with Edward.
| lovebel chapter 5 . 6/7/2010
I am grinning from ear to ear. I love, love your story! And again am totally curious to see where it goes, especially with control freak Bella and plain cool Edward. :)
Thank you for the update
Till next time,
| AzraCullen chapter 5 . 6/7/2010
love love love it.
When u replied to my review i secretly hopes u wud post abnother chapter up soon.
I love bella, i really do. Shes awkward and real and wodnerful. Shes a real person.
Edwards a bit too cocky, and i wonder if hes playing with her feelings. He knows how much she likes him and is enjoying it, thats kinda not fair.
I love finn, lets hope bella meets him, i seriously think they cud get on great. both are so sweet and innocent.
| sherryola chapter 4 . 6/6/2010
Oh, that was so sweet. i like this Edward. He's very endearing.