Reviews for American dreams in an English village
xXNaruxSasuXx chapter 31 . 3/13/2015
VERY VERY BEAUTIFUL!
FANTASTIC WRITING SKILLS! THE STORY WAS VERY ENGAGING!
I WAS CAPTIVATED! YOU ROCK!
YOU BRILLIANTLY PORTRAYED ALL STAGES OF ARTHURS LIFE TILL HERE.
WELL WRITTEN. MARVELLOUS!
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE TIME AND EVERY EFFORT YOU PUT INTO WRTING THIS. TRULY AMAZING ENDING AS WELL- IT COULD NOT HAVE BEEN BETTER .
VerdePradera chapter 31 . 3/8/2015
I've just finished reading this story and man, you're amazing. I haven't slept more than four hours or so the last week just because I always wanted to read more and more and more so I kept telling myself things like "just a bit more and then I'll go to sleep" "just half a chapter more" ans so on untill my mother woke up to go to work (yup, not a healthy thing to do). You captivated me with your words and now I just can say thank you, for giving this wonderful story to the fandom, one of the best we have here. You're such a great writer and I hope I hear from you one day, I'll definitely buy anything you write even if it is homework or your supermarket list xD
It's been a long time since I last read a story so realistic and well written so I found myself crying my eyes out more frecuently than I'd like to admit. Arthur's story was tough but so very beautiful that it has touched my heart.
You're great man and I really wish you the best. I'll be looking forward for whatever you write! :D
SheWhoLeavesCrappyReviews chapter 31 . 3/2/2015
Oh this was beautiful, absolutely beautiful. Arthur's been through so much and he definitely deserved the wonderful ending you gave him.

It's a pity about his dad, but at the same time, it just made the story more realistic. Some people just aren't as open-minded as we'd like. Arthur really grew up when he stopped letting his father's lack of acceptance drag him down. I was happy that he got closure with his mom at least. Though she wasn't very supportive at first, she's trying and I quite liked her character for it.

I went through a roller coaster of emotions while reading this.- I was laughing at how cute they were when they were kids, with Ivan announcing that he had nuclear weapons in his bag, I was almost in tears when Arthur started getting bullied, I even rooted for Daniel a bit when he provided a temporary escape for Arthur when everything sucked. I was smiling like a moron at the end though.

This had been a wonderful 31 chapters. You are a very talented writer and I thank you for sharing your work with us.
FujoFreak chapter 31 . 3/2/2015
Hello there,
Since I found this fanfic several days ago, nothing seems appealing in my daily life but to read your wonderful story and let myself drown into it.. I can't even describe it in words. Now I sounded like a lazy ass lol
I love your way of writing, I love the character's development, I love your sweet plots it gave me cavities.. I love all of your boys! even the jerk, Evan, also Arthur's dad (lol) The feels! It's oozing in every damn chapter, you are amazing! What a masterpiece I can't believe I found one here. God know how I love this slice-of-life-kind of story you have..
It's a long, beautiful story. Perfect ending.. though we crave for a smexy sequel anytime, eh? *wink
hobocat123 chapter 31 . 2/28/2015
;_; I think I can only be mentally stable if there is a sequel
Slivery chapter 1 . 2/22/2015
I can't help myself reviewing such a brilliant story now. It is so real that it almost pains me when I see Arthur suffering from the stereotype, which people has already taken in deep. He experienced the painful growth, and things with all the people and Alfred of course, the good, the bad. It seems as if their life goes on itself and you just write it down, detailedly and emotionally. It is the best feeling when reading a story. I'm sure that I love this story and consider it the most touching story I've ever read. Thank you for writing this.
Guest chapter 20 . 2/19/2015
Hi. Your story is freaking amazing, but I don't review very well. I just wanted to say this story reminds me of a song I heard once. I think the lyrics were like:

I couldn't tell you
Why he felt that way
He felt it
Every day

I couldn't help him
I just watched him make
The same mistakes
Again

"What's wrong, what's wrong now?"
"Too many, too many problems..."
Don't know where he belongs
Where he belongs...

He wants to go home!
But nobody's home!
It's where she lies
Broken inside...!
With no place to go,
No place to go,
No place to dry her eyes...
Broken inside!

Open your eyes
And look inside
And find the reason
Why...

He's been rejected
And now he can't find
What he's left
Behind...

"Be strong, be strong now!"
"Too many, too many problems..."
Don't know where he belongs
Where he belongs

He wants to go home!
But nobody's home!
It's where she lies
Broken inside...!
With no place to go,
No place to go,
No place to dry her eyes...
Broken inside!

(That's all I remember, anyway. ;)
ChanPruDix chapter 2 . 2/15/2015
You deserve something. I don't know what, but something great for the way you portray children's minds. Like the sissy meaning fat thing. I really enjoy it.
Victoria Zhang chapter 31 . 2/8/2015
Hello there! I'm a reader from China.I really like your article and I am sure that it will win lots of Chinese E-pals' admiration if I have the honor to translate it and upload it to a forum in China.I promise I will try hard to not to change the literal meaning when I translate it and I will label the original author (your name). I wish you can accept it, thank you so much.
Waiting for your response,
Victoria
Guest chapter 31 . 2/7/2015
I have no words because that final sentence took them all away. Wow just wow. You are such a beautiful writer i cant even cope!
Jinx335 chapter 15 . 1/29/2015
I'm crying now. This is your fault. XD
Jinx335 chapter 12 . 1/28/2015
I feel like a perv but, this chapter is beautiful!
Jinx335 chapter 11 . 1/28/2015
FUCKING FINALLY! THEY KISSED! YAAAYYYY! XD
M chapter 31 . 1/23/2015
This story is absolutely amazing. Your characterization is fantastic and the character development is mindblowing, especially for a fanfic. It is very rare to find fanfiction with such a well-constructed, consistently interesting plot. Even though the story is long, it never dragged. It is definitely a story worthy re-reading.

I can only imagine how wonderful your writing is in your native language (since it is already so good in English).

I sincerely hope that you will be recognised for your talent in the future (if becoming a professional author is something you would be interested in, that is).
arisu chapter 19 . 1/18/2015
this chapter almost made me cry
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