Reviews for American dreams in an English village |
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![]() ![]() ![]() oh god i'm crying right now |
![]() ![]() ![]() ohshitohshitohshitohshitohshitohshitohshitohshitohshitohshitohshitohshitohshitohshitohshitohshitohshitohshitohshitohshitohshitohshitohshitohshitohshitohshit |
![]() ![]() ![]() god Arthur's father is a dick just let them have there goodbye |
![]() ![]() ![]() i knew something was up when he noticed that they were drinking from a different bottle AND I FUCKIN KNEW THAT HE WOULD TRY TO RAPE ARTHUR AT SOME POINT GOOD BOY ARTHUR FOR KICKING HIM IN THE BALLS! |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO PUNK ARTHUR ROCKS! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i'm so pissed off right now at them i want to get into my lap top into this story and slap them across the face right now :( but it's just a story and i can't do that *angry sigh* |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh god nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo if they do this i'm stopping reading this to cry |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wasn’t disappointed, not even once. This story is magnificent that I will hardly believe that you’re not a profesional writer with some degree or something. I can do nothing but congratulate you. What a nice story you wrote! What I liked the most was the hint of reality you created it with. It’s not the typical cliché love story I was specting, it had such a beautiful relationship development. I actually felt the character’s pain while reading, and I cried a lot, which is something no book has ever achieve. You have talent! |
![]() ![]() ![]() just SOOOOO sweet and SOOOO real. i love alfred very much in this fic!with his shyness and forwardness. though he was kind of an asshole in the middle. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jesus crispy! Those boys are mad! |
![]() ![]() Thank You. THANK YOU. THANKYOUTHANKYOU. tHaNk YoU. The ending made me shed a tear, and I just enjoyed this story so much!, I loved every sentence of it, and I'll probably end up re-reading this sometime later. You're writing just makes me want to give you a hug, so?, *opens arms*. I hope you keep writing, and making my boring summer days at home much more thrilling |
![]() ![]() This was amazing! I love your writing style and your realism. Thank you for the great read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant. |
![]() ![]() I LOVED your story like you have no idea! X) I really loved how the story started since the first time they met, written on the perspective of small kids and how it all Developed beautifully (and wwith lots of drama in between XD) into the story it is now, going from little kids who hate each other to becoming best friends (and then boyfriends 3) then moving schools, and having fight by fight by fight, Arthur's green hair and black clothes and Alfred and his girlfriends and the popularity, moving on to when Arthur came out, when Alfred talked about his life back in America, the bullying, the fights Arthur had with his parents, and it all came down to being accepted by Alfred's parents and discovering the world might not be such a bad place after all. Their future seems promising 3. OMG I LOVED EVERY SINGLE WORD OF THAT STORY33333333. :') |
![]() ![]() *dies because feels* I started reading this at 12pm (noon) and now it's 12:52 am (midnight) so this thing took me like 13 hours to read lol! This is such an amazing story like I seriously can't even deal with this anymore! Every time something sad happened I would just stare at my wall and cry for like ten minutes... anyway I really enjoyed this! Don't stop writing,you're so good at it! |