Reviews for The Practice of Love
VeThena chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
I'm thinking there's way too much going on in this story. And cancer? Really, are you trying to break my heart. Ex-husband is James and current boyfriend is Jake, where will Edward feature in this? I feel like there will be too much heartbreak happening in this story if you don't cheat it. But seeing as it's still new I'm all for the ride
carey1090 chapter 5 . 6/12/2010
Great chapter. Looking forward to the next one.
Probems chapter 3 . 6/12/2010
Them both being in semi-relationships yet semi attracted to each other is a turn off. Bella is a good mom but it's obvious she isn't serious about Jake so she did her daughter wrong just living with him when their not moving towards a full commitment. Kids get attached and will always remember living with mom's boyfriend only to have it fall through. Single women shouldn't live with boyfriends when they have such young kids.
Teri7171 chapter 5 . 6/12/2010
Great chapter. Can't wait for Bella to see Edward at the party.
fuzzyltlwingedthing chapter 5 . 6/12/2010
Ugh, the end of another chapter. I always jones for more. Your story haunts my thoughts between chapters just wondering what will happen next!
irmasencullens chapter 5 . 6/12/2010
wow,its !the story getting brighter now,and i can see what the point!keep writing,your gifted on it!
MadelineRenee chapter 5 . 6/12/2010
Great chapter!
Ticcing Bat chapter 5 . 6/12/2010
oo looking forward to the next update very good
penelope chapter 5 . 6/12/2010
the last chapter was amazing,for once again :-)

i very much enjoyed the kind of relationship between rosalie and bella...really good.

xxx
gossip-bangkok chapter 5 . 6/12/2010
so Bella has a thing for Edward huh? :P

Love it

can't wait for more

thanks
whynotjustjumpintoavolcano chapter 5 . 6/11/2010
twilight/erin brokovich crossover? who would have thought :) i like the way you described girl time with rose. also, it made me thirsty for a margharita (and it's 8 a.m. in my time zone). anyway, thank you!
PCCTwiFF23 chapter 5 . 6/11/2010
this is one of my favorite chapters so far and i think it will probably stay as one throughout the rest of your story. i love the conversation and general repertoire and banter between Bella and Rosalie. i have a feeling this may be one of my favorite Rosalies in all of FF! and i absolutely was cracking up during Rose's set up of Bella's fantasy, what with the Victorian house, billowing sheer curtains, etc. lol! can't wait til the next update!
vereen72 chapter 5 . 6/11/2010
I love this story. I can't wait to see when they will meet again next. It could be either the party or the hunt for the attorney. Great Job as always.
akjamma chapter 5 . 6/11/2010
great chapter !
Kahlilsbaby chapter 5 . 6/11/2010
goodness gracious god all mighty this is just spectacular lol but really it is amazing u r an awesome writer and i deff cnt wait for more
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