|Reviews for A World Away Outtakes|
| Simevra Lestrange chapter 2 . 11/14/2013
Lol. I know twilight fanfics are just insanely funny, but this took the cake. You write well, though. The line 'adorable with lack of knowledge...' i lold. Just say adorably dumb. Or bimbo.
btw, are you a fifty shades fan?
| ChristyWIX chapter 2 . 6/14/2013
That was fantastic to read his POV's on this part of the story. I really enjoyed that . . . especially knowing his version of their first time. If you've stopped these out takes than I all done here as you are. However, if you are not, I would really like that Jasper POV you threatened a few chapters back. Of him and Edward's discussion on marriage . More importantly, Jasper's version of the accident. Yes, please!
| ChristyWIX chapter 1 . 6/14/2013
Holy crap that was so very freaking hot. That had to be the best lemon you wrote in this story yet . . . wowie!
| irelandk chapter 2 . 12/26/2011
| twirob chapter 2 . 10/3/2011
awesome out takes they met on the 13th july! thats my eldest daughters birthday! what about more out takes? :D
| Just Sus chapter 2 . 4/15/2011
Oh, holy shizz...how much I love EPOV! That boy was into her (literally and figuretively) from the start, eh?
There some hawt sexin' here, bb...
| Just Sus chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
I love EPOV...so sweet and sexy!
| Ziva84 chapter 2 . 3/2/2011
| Ziva84 chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
It was great reading this from EPOV!
| Sunsetwing chapter 2 . 2/28/2011
I am soooooo gonna miss this story. I hope you revisit it some day :)
| Sunsetwing chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
I love his need for her :)
| Aldi74 chapter 2 . 2/1/2011
So I found the outtakes and wanted to see the first chapter from his POV. It was great!
| ilovealion chapter 2 . 8/2/2010
Well, the outtakes were the whipped cream and cherry on a wonderful story! I truly appreciate FF writers! Thanks for making my day!
| Swino chapter 2 . 7/24/2010
So I've just managed to read this outtake, by god girl I wish I had read it weeks ago! I loved seeing Edwards take on Bella, how smitten he was, how he wanted to kiss her but didn't know how she felt. For the first time in his life Edward had to work for it, probably making it even more meaningful and worthwhile when they finally got together - over six months of sexual tension!
Loved seeing their email correspondence again, seeing how excited he was to receive the emails. Oh and the return home sex, all lemony goodness! Hmm just reminding me oh how much I love your Sealward.
Feel free to do more outtakes as this was sensational.
| glo4twilight chapter 2 . 7/19/2010
it was so awesome to know that he was smitten with bella right from the get-go. this was a beautiful chapter another definite winner for me with epov! every aspect was so capturing and the lemon from epov...mhmmmmm what can i say or do but run for the fucking cold shower!lol! you did so well and i'd still love to have an outtake of the birth of their baby and see how edward takes to his baby and of course see what they're having! brilliant just brilliant!must go to bed now it's after 4am and i have to be up at 6am! it was all worth the lack of sleep!lol! thanx again.