This reminds me of paper towns. The way she says I'm a traveler and all that...

did you hear that? Well, was the sound of my heart breaking, I really liked this story, amazing

Wow, beautiful!

wow. I don't know which ship I prefer, Teddy-Lily or the sick, twisted one that popped into my head while reading tbhis fic: James-Lily

lol. XD

That's just... beautiful.

I've never really been a fan of Teddy/Lily because of the age difference and the brother/sister relationship they would probably have, but this is so sensitively written and the emotions are so pure that I couldn't help but love it.

Well done,

Lplli xx

Awe!

That was heartbreaking - I love how you characterized Lily and Teddy and I absolutelypositively love and adore your James. This line: "the world isn't in your arms anymore" is perfection.

Great writing!

I love this story! Fantastic! I'm sad she left.. but I get it.. Which Is amazing of you to write in a way that makes the reader get it.. Love!