Reviews for Give Love Another Chance
Guest chapter 23 . 2/26
Roy is a bit violent and jealous and possessive and disrepectful and Riza is too submissive and naive in here, both are a bit ooc in my opinion. It usually happens in this kind of stories, and personally I don't think this kind of romance shows a healthy relationship. Besides the criticism I think you did good job with this fic, it's enterntaining to read and you want to read the next chapter, but I needed to say that these kind of romanitc stories with a dominant and powerful male character and a submissive female tend to show things that are not healthy in a relationship (Roy is too jealous and sometimes gets violent towards Riza, if you ever are in a relationship where your partner behaves like Roy does in this fic take the behavior as a red flag). I read this some year ago and I enjoyed it more, now with some experiences and a bit more of maturity I only notice the "red flags".
I don't want to discourage you to keep writing (and you obviously can do what you want no matter what an internet stranger may say) but I wanted to leave my thoughts here about healthy relationships because when we are young and inexperienced we may feel that it's okay to be treated in some ways that are not okay when we actually deserve to be treated better.
Have a good day.
Ps. Sorry if something sounds weird, English is not my first language and I'm typing this on my phone.
Shijaeger chapter 23 . 10/21/2017
Ah,this was...just amazing! I...I'm so happy,omg...
Shijaeger chapter 21 . 10/21/2017
I cant believe what it's happening ...I freaking cant...
Shijaeger chapter 16 . 10/21/2017
I'm so fucking dead...damn it!
Shijaeger chapter 8 . 10/20/2017
I really love Jean
Guest chapter 7 . 10/27/2016
The pacings toooooo fast
Guest chapter 6 . 10/27/2016
They just met for what, 2-3 days, and she already loves him?
acrosseverystar chapter 2 . 10/8/2016
Chapter 2 and she's already in his home. Daaaang. Mad respect for Hawkeye.
NoahEarlGraves chapter 23 . 12/2/2014
Simple, nice, love it
imaginator317 chapter 23 . 12/27/2013
holy hell that was really good.
Juunnachi chapter 23 . 10/11/2013
One of the best royai story. Im glad that there are loads of wonderful royai stories and this is one of them. Thanks alot for this. Xoxo
Tzaritsa chapter 6 . 7/13/2013
Oh god... I see all the drama bound to ensue!
AjaxVibe chapter 23 . 4/22/2013
Yeah there has to be something in my eye this cant be tears.
AjaxVibe chapter 22 . 4/22/2013
Don't worry about it it was not to rushed. Damn man I am supposed to be a man why is there something in my eye.
AjaxVibe chapter 21 . 4/22/2013
Yeah that is just depressing.
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