Reviews for Broken Trust
theHuntgoeson chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
You write Keats with the right sense of horror and disgust ("the stench of Keats" and Alex's sense of being dirty after his assault), and you capture the darker mood between Gene and Alex in S3 so well. How like him to be so gentle and caring with her, while keeping up his emotional defences. Their verbal duelling and admissions of trust are so right - especially "I trust you with everything. Even my heart." Beautiful!
Malena Hunt chapter 1 . 6/23/2010
This is really good. Pity I didn't read it before. It was a bit painful for me at the beginning (I cannot stand Keats) but really good payoff at the end. I hope you keep writing Gene and Alex. :)
Deweynumbers chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
Keats remains a nightmare, but the phrase 'slithering tongue' is perfect. A beautiful little story as Alex moves from being trapped by her own fantasies to an honest expression of trust. If only she had been able to take that 'leap' earlier...!
Jazzola chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
Aw... I love Galex 3

This is awesome!

Jazzola :)
Dinny93 chapter 1 . 5/27/2010
That was lovely. The bit with Keats filled me with disgust, obviously, but you more than made up for it with all the Galex. Gene was so tender and caring, yet without changing. He was still the Gene-Genie, it was just another side to him. And the end was fantastic :D

Dinny

xxx
Novindalf chapter 1 . 5/25/2010
"I trust you with everything. Even my heart."

Aww, that was lovely D
TheMinxy6 chapter 1 . 5/25/2010
I love this. It's so well paced and written, their game of trust and Gene's tenderness compared to Keats' aggressiveness- great juxtaposition.
michelle chapter 1 . 5/25/2010
i liked this story really cute.
icingsugar chapter 1 . 5/25/2010
I loved this! Good job.

I always thought in the series Keats would try and have his nasty way with her.