Reviews for Forehead Protector
Iron Monkey Fist chapter 2 . 11/16/2014
That was a good follow up chapter until you just went completely random in the second half.
Iron Monkey Fist chapter 1 . 11/16/2014
That was great. It was funny, heartfelt and touching.
November Ember chapter 2 . 1/21/2013
The second chapter was hilarious ! Loved it
narusakufan489 chapter 2 . 2/16/2011
Maybe one if sakura found out that lord fourth hokage was his dad
Fuzzlets chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
so funny :D
Fuzzlets chapter 2 . 2/14/2011
Anime Freak456 chapter 2 . 6/18/2010
Very cute! I loved it! I wasn't expecting Naruto to be dreaming, that came as a shock but I kinda figured it out when Danzou was there and then Shino was riding on a giant cockroach. Anyway, I love your writing, you are a very good author. Keep up the good work
Cerridwen-Maiden chapter 2 . 6/13/2010
whew. now THAT was funny. kick ass job!
anonymous chapter 2 . 5/30/2010
What's a chapped neck? C'mon chapped is only used for lips. Lol. Oh and Naruto has sparkling white teeth lol. He is gorgeous.
Disgruntled Reader chapter 2 . 5/30/2010
Woah! I liked where it was heading, but then you mention Camp of Duty. Seriously? Couldn't you pick a more better and a less campfest shooter like Battlefield Bad Company 2? Eh, either way I hate authors taking me out of the story by advertising. Please don't do it again.
koleare chapter 2 . 5/30/2010
The humour part just made my day. Great second part, and I hope you write more (*ahem* NS of course ;)
sakurajou chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
All in all, this was a pretty good fic. But at times it sounded like you were trying too hard to be "deep" or "poetic" with your writing. It's okay to use common words. You don't have to put in the complicated names of different things just to make it sound cooler. And I found the parentheses a tad annoying, but I've always hated random parentheses that weren't necessary... XD

Don't get me wrong, this fic was great. It's just the format bothered me somewhat. XDD

Anyhoo, keep up the good work, and welcome back! c:
NxS chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
I find that all the parentheses are really annoying. If people really want to know the meaning of the word, then they can just look it up. It kinda degrades the quality of your writing, which is very nice by the way. So if you ever edit this, I suggest you take the parentheses out. Overall, I found this story very enjoyable and comical. Great job. )
wind797 chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
Well that was good and yes I would like to see what happens in this story so please finish it thanks
koleare chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
Great story
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