Reviews for Winter Holidays
lillefelefe chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
It was a good story, don't worry. It just ended very quickly. You gave a whole bunch of detail leading up to "the event" and no details of the event itself. That's all I can critique though. It was very sweet
esmellabrooke chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
It's lovely. :)
Electra Rain Bathory chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
this reminds me very much of my first time.

however, you should go into detail about their love making.

keep writing!

Electra Bathory
AspWriter13 chapter 1 . 5/27/2010
i really liked, maybe not the "love" part like how they refered to each other but other than that it was a really good story
Mrs. Hiddleston chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
This was really good, I think. My favorite line would have to be "Lily, you're making it hard for me to concentrate." It really sounds like something James would say. It's a little corny, but not to the point where it's bad. I like it
ginnyweasley777 chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
aww, I totally love this

it seems very realistic too
KRiSTiNEDAHLiNG chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
when she said wait i was like oh man lily evans you are very cruel if you end this now. haha.
growinghope chapter 1 . 5/25/2010
this is quite good! My only major note: i think James was probably lying HORIZONTAL, not vertically
Lady Potter chapter 1 . 5/25/2010
I loved the ending! it was so sweet!