Reviews for Who I Am
lolicookies chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
aww THAT WAS CUTE! LOVED IT! )
KingKhan chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
"Fingers wandered over the planes of her face as though exploring an instrument he couldn't wait to play"

3
The.Ocean.Shadow chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
This was so awesome! I loved it! SO MUCH!
Kamakaze Kheri chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
I read this on my iPod yesterday or the day before but didn't review because I always mess up on it. So, sorry that this is just a little late.

I think you really nailed Nick and Macy as characters in this story, like how Macy is strong but can be vulnerable and how Nick is the genius, but sometimes just really, really clueless. I love the style and the way everything flows together. Overall, it's a beautiful story that I will definitely be reading again. :D
Brown Eyes Parker chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
I liked this story, it was SO cute.
PurpleInkSBU chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
well...what was the last one ? Lols

_ i didn't catch it . D
foxystiles chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
AWWWWWW! Poor Nick! I liked that this was in Nick's P.O.V. its a nice change from the Macy P.O.V.
kolirox chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
"Fingers wandered over the planes of her face as though exploring an instrument he couldn't wait to play—reverence and eagerness and happiness were all wrapped up in the gentle way his fingertips slid over her skin." Epic my dear! Just fantastic. I really really loved this. I enjoyed how Nick was the one behaving strangly and he thought Macy was. Loved it. Now OPEN YOUR PRESENT!
Aimlessly Unknown chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
i loved it so much, the way it was written just made me laugh and grin and kind of cry when Nick thought Mace was leaving.

well done.

~AU.
yellowlightning chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
very nice D love the new perspective from macy. great job! i look forward to future stories, until then keep up the great writing!
jaydedangel69 chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
Love it! It was awesome! Keep up the great work! Thank you. :)
Sweetgalsab chapter 1 . 5/27/2010
I LLAAAABBB YOUUUU!

So, when I discovered this, I was hiding out in the bathroom from my auntie and her mates who were suggesting(THREATENING) a makeover, so I fled from the make-up and foundation pots. *Shudders* And so, I discovered a new story - better yet, by you. So I read it. (Well, duh - you wrote it - NUFF SAID.)

And when I discovered 'twas the one you gave me a sneak of, I squeed loudly and jumped up and down. Then I saw it was for me, I squealed and jumped up and down a bit more. Apparently too much, because now I have a pretty blueish purple bruise from when my forehead collided with the cupboard. But that couldn't make me any sadder (and it matches my top sooo...xD)

BUT OH MY GOD!

You're attention to detail is impeccable. I love very part of it and it only makes it so much more vivid, I see it playing out in my mind. And abstract Macy is sooooo good!

"Macy is leaving. Macy is saying goodbye. Macy is changing and I can't stop it" - the repetition of this broke my heart. You write so wonderful. And then the change..."She's not leaving?" Had me smiling and AW'ing to the max (At this point Aunt was standing outside the door saying "Freak Child.")

And the whole intimate part at the end had me smiling - and what an ending. Yeah, I can pretty much guess why.

You are amazing. ILY. Now I shall get back to you on msn and explain to you why the authorities do not need to get involved in my happiness. XD

Your Reenie.

Xxxxxxxx
Yodeling Pickles chapter 1 . 5/27/2010
They were distracted from talking because Kevin raced by on a jet powered scooter? That's my guess.
mint repeat chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
Butbutbut, I like abstracted Macy! There's plenty charm to her like that. like you show us here. ;)

I'll admit, I only know the music for the first line of Who I Am, but, I loved your placement of lyrics. And when Macy say's she wants someone to love her for who she /really/ is and mean, it makes a lot of sense and in a way is telling of how we toss around the world, regardless of how the other person perceives it. Food for thought!

Dude, what I love that both of them were afraid of the changes that were happening with each other, when all it was falling in love. But that is change too right? And in an unconscious manner scary, cause you cant recognize who you are and then the other person seems distant and vice versa for the other person too. I think this was an excellent way to describe love. No ever touches upon the scary overwhelming aspect of it.

Obviously my review is a little confused, but know this: I LOVED IT. :)
PurpleAngel87 chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
I misread the beginning note and for some reason thought it was Kevin until I got to the 'if you couldn't play guitar, you could still sing or play golf' bit, but I do think it works better with Nick. First of all, I love that you tried this. The lyrics of 'Who I Am' are really interesting, for want of a better word, and it was nice to read it as a Macy centric piece. And the inclusion of the relevant lines was great. :)

I really liked the final scene where she finally tells him that she's in love with him, because all this time they've both thought the other person is changing and its out of their control when really the only changing that's been taking place is that they've been falling for each other. I liked how she exuded confidence in the last scene rather than nervousness which is the obvious trait to go with.

I absolutely LOVE the attention you give to detail; right at the start with lines like this:

'That was when she drew her knees up to her chest and wrapped her arms around them. She fiddled with the tassel that hung off of one of her boots, smiling faintly down at her bare hand, her lips a purplish-blue from her drink.' And just generally throughout this story, the detail that you included and the descriptions. Don't think they went unnoticed. :D

But this was a lovely one shot; I think it does qualify as a song fic, but then I don't know much about song fics, so I'm maybe not the best person to ask. :P Great job! It goes to my favourites because the writing style is awesome. :D
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