Reviews for Seeing Red
moira of the mountain chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
I somehow suspect it is his own death that has come as a precognition in his dreams...
Inkfire chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
I liked this, it was beautifully done
AfraidOfFalling chapter 1 . 5/25/2010
Ohhhh that was beautiful! Very poignant. I loved it! My interpretation is that it symbolizes his relationship with Lily...oh, it's so lovely! Fantastic job!
whitehound chapter 1 . 5/25/2010
I suppose the red represents Lily.

Constructive criticism? Well, it's well-written but considering that it describes a scene in which very little really happens it's a bit long, even though it's a vignette. If you were describing this dream in passing as part of a longer story it would probably take one or at most two paragraphs. Could you maybe re-work it as a 100-word drabble? It would be perfect for that sort of format.