|Reviews for The Confrontation|
| Molotov chapter 1 . 2/16
What a great scene! A great character moment the show sadly missed.
| s-david-m chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
Nice little interlude.
| NickyR chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
So as you can see I am very behind on updates, i enjoyed this missing scene, i loved the interaction you created and wish their was more of it on the show, heck maybe we'll get some more ellie/sarah interaction at the bachelorette party :) ? Out of everything I enjoyed the hallmark card comment the most! Thanks for writing
| JonofPDX chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
I really like this story a lot. There is nowhere near enough Ellie-centric fic around, and she is such a key part of the shows emotional core.
Your Ellie is just perfect-she is wrong on some things, and kind of flawed-and certainly judgmental. But she loves her brother so much-as much as he loves her-and that shines through in every word even as she blames Sarah for things that aren't her fault.
| Tempe4Booth chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
intersting PLEASE WRITE MORE CHUCK FICS
| fAteD lOvE chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
This was awesome, totally in character and I love these little scenes between the characters. I've been complaining all season that there weren't enough Chuck/Ellie sibling relationship scenes, and the finale definitely proved me wrong. I'm a happy camper, except I'm still waiting for Sarah to finally stop becoming an accessory and go back to her bad-assery.
I went totally off topic, so... update again! I love your writing :)
| supesfan18 chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
great job, would love to see a longer uncut version, i can imagine lots of other words and a more pissed off ellie out there
| Owl Emporium chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
This was great! Good job. (: I loved this...I still think Ellie is being unfair, somehow. I get it though...anyways, this was great. (:
| Mike chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
Great job that was most definitely missing from the finale!
| jcat30 chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
This was a good add to the finale. I felt Ellie accepted everything way to easily, even having Chuck promise to get out before she knew all the facts. Your "missing scene" helps where NBC failed.
| Just Chuck chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
just cute. thanks
| Fire From Above chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
Good job with Ellie. It was nice having her getting the truth from Sarah.
| Lilyoctopi chapter 1 . 5/25/2010
Great missing piece. I'd love to see the "I'm sorry I hit you with a frying pan" story, if you'd be up for a sequel. ;)
| aardvark7734 chapter 1 . 5/25/2010
Atlee, I'm really pleased you wrote this.
I've been waiting for a Sarah-Ellie scene like this for a long time, and it's sad that this once-in-a-series opportunity was missed. Ellie will, after all, only be shocked by this revelation once.
And overall, I liked what you did here, having Ellie come in hurt and confused, lashing out at Sarah peevishly. That Sarah then took the high road, absorbing Ellie's anger and delivering truth more than false comfort was satisfying, even if I'm troubled somewhat with respect to canon (Sarah's usually more flustered and uncertain around Ellie). I guess it's reasonable to assume that Ellie's barb pushed Sarah into "mission mode" and she drew confidence from her professional persona.
While I really liked your dialogue choices, and I thought the conversation flowed very naturally to Sarah's attestation of fealty to Chuck, I think a more convincing reversal in Ellie's attitude towards Sarah could ultimately have been achieved by having Chuck enter the room at the end and have Ellie witness he and Sarah interact in the complete absence of lies and covers.
Ellie's always been acutely intuitive and perceptive, and although her head is spinning at how much had been hidden right in front of her eyes, seeing the genuine love and caring between the two under their present circumstances would make it the constant she could believe in.
| NerdsAheard chapter 1 . 5/25/2010
Yay I like Ellie and Sarah chats. And this one was especially needed since Ellie's been so in the dark about everything. There's bound to be a lot of mistrust and whatnot floating around. Great job! Are we going to get an Ellie and Casey chat too? :)