Reviews for Swing My Way
ew chapter 1 . 8/15/2014
stop cursing every sentence. we get it she's mad. I stopped reading by the 3rd paragraph. it turns people off
Darling Cullen chapter 36 . 4/8/2014
I just read the last chapter and I really like your story but the French is really bad sometimes, it makes me smile, you used a translator didn't you ? I can help you if you want French is my mother language :)
Guest chapter 34 . 1/6/2014
Just a couple of things I've picked up on:

1. When talking about an engaged male (Edward), the spelling for fiance is with only one 'e'. You have written the female spelling for both - fiancee

2. You had Fay give Bella two combs that Amy wore at her wedding. Except, Amy didn't get married, which is why Edward is a Masen and not a Cullen.
ffictionreader01 chapter 36 . 1/6/2014
It was a great story, but I could have done with a little less sex and none of the porn. The plot got lost in the last few chapters between all the sightseeing and the sex. I think it should have stopped at the wedding.

Now that it's complete, I think you should go back over it and edit it ruthlessly. There are a lot of mistakes.
amnoregon chapter 1 . 9/13/2013
I just found your story... and I'm hooked! I can't wait to read more.
Veronique24 chapter 2 . 3/26/2013
Wonder if Bella's husbad had as an amazing time as her?
bamagal110 chapter 36 . 3/19/2013
that was so awesome except she keeps draging poor Edward to those aweful places...
B chapter 5 . 3/14/2013
I'm sorry but the grammar in this is fucking ridiculous. Please review before posting or find yourself a decent beta, because this sounds like it was written by an 11 year old.
Guest chapter 11 . 12/27/2012
Both Bella and Eward are cruel. I seriously don't like them.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
Think you say "mother fucker" enough
jule2 chapter 36 . 10/10/2012
I really enjoyed this. Thanks
dbg chapter 8 . 9/18/2012
Jessica is a good friend with the stapler and not judging Bella. I havn't seen Angela as anything but nice before this fic.

I love the chemistry but don't know how I feel about the two burned out marriages.

Great story.
youngandmature chapter 36 . 7/11/2012
She was totally pregnant!
youngandmature chapter 29 . 7/10/2012
So happy Edward did that. Rose wouldn't have been following protocol by not being alert. Laurent was on the loose. And Bella's just an idiot. Poor Edward. And I love Carlisle so much! :(
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 31 . 5/15/2012
Fay and Edward's dynamic is hilarious.

Edward has an excellent way with got me crying again.

Some part of me still wishes that Edward refused Bella because that day was about his dad (not his relationship dramas) but then another is glad that he's not isolating people.

Alice did annoy me though with her pushy attitude towards Edward; the guy's had it rough, he doesn't need her nagging tacked onto it.

Awesome job!
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