|Reviews for Swing My Way|
| Guest chapter 34 . 1/6
Just a couple of things I've picked up on:
1. When talking about an engaged male (Edward), the spelling for fiance is with only one 'e'. You have written the female spelling for both - fiancee
2. You had Fay give Bella two combs that Amy wore at her wedding. Except, Amy didn't get married, which is why Edward is a Masen and not a Cullen.
| ffictionreader01 chapter 36 . 1/6
It was a great story, but I could have done with a little less sex and none of the porn. The plot got lost in the last few chapters between all the sightseeing and the sex. I think it should have stopped at the wedding.
Now that it's complete, I think you should go back over it and edit it ruthlessly. There are a lot of mistakes.
| amnoregon chapter 1 . 9/13/2013
I just found your story... and I'm hooked! I can't wait to read more.
| Veronique24 chapter 2 . 3/26/2013
Wonder if Bella's husbad had as an amazing time as her?
| bamagal110 chapter 36 . 3/19/2013
that was so awesome except she keeps draging poor Edward to those aweful places...
| B chapter 5 . 3/14/2013
I'm sorry but the grammar in this is fucking ridiculous. Please review before posting or find yourself a decent beta, because this sounds like it was written by an 11 year old.
| Guest chapter 11 . 12/27/2012
Both Bella and Eward are cruel. I seriously don't like them.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
Think you say "mother fucker" enough
| jule2 chapter 36 . 10/10/2012
I really enjoyed this. Thanks
| dbg chapter 8 . 9/18/2012
Jessica is a good friend with the stapler and not judging Bella. I havn't seen Angela as anything but nice before this fic.
I love the chemistry but don't know how I feel about the two burned out marriages.
| youngandmature chapter 36 . 7/11/2012
She was totally pregnant!
| youngandmature chapter 29 . 7/10/2012
So happy Edward did that. Rose wouldn't have been following protocol by not being alert. Laurent was on the loose. And Bella's just an idiot. Poor Edward. And I love Carlisle so much! :(
| Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 31 . 5/15/2012
Fay and Edward's dynamic is hilarious.
Edward has an excellent way with words...it got me crying again.
Some part of me still wishes that Edward refused Bella because that day was about his dad (not his relationship dramas) but then another is glad that he's not isolating people.
Alice did annoy me though with her pushy attitude towards Edward; the guy's had it rough, he doesn't need her nagging tacked onto it.
| Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 30 . 5/15/2012
Poor Edward but I'm glad he met a nice fellow like Mark.
I was wondering when Jasper and Alice would make their appearance.
'Instead I had the devil at my right, sitting with the angel giving each other a fist bump. The angel was smoking a cigarette; his lil' halo was hanging crooked while the devil was eating popcorn. Fucking traitors!' -very amusing visual
Thank goodness that was a dream...I would have been pissed with Edward actually followed through with that dream of his (plus Bella was f*cking scary in it).
There was so many moments in this chapter that brought me to tears...POOR EDWARD!
| Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 29 . 5/15/2012
'He even turned himself in once for hitting a raccoon.' -LOL!
LOL for Carlisle fliritng with Rosalie a bit after the raid.
NO! Why did Carlisle have to die? He just got back into Edward's life again. *sniffle* He will never learn more about Amy from Carlisle now.
Poor Edward but I agree with his anger towards Bella...she should be comforting him, not Angela.