Reviews for Something Sweeter Than Strawberries
Guest chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
lovve ittttttttttt
Guest chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
awsome thts what im talkin bout
Saixrs chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
Loved it! Amazing! : D
IchigoRukiaforever chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
Woot ;D Sexy and hot!

Coulda done without the blood though :/ too graphic D8

but besides that, awesome work ;)
Lord Ruby34 chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
The story was fairly decent all in all. However there were a few problems, mostly with grammar. Sentences in quotations need to have proper punctuation and capitalization. Also commas are your friends, don't be afraid of them. And if I may suggest typing your stories in a word processor if you don't have a beta, It'll remove most of your errors. There were also some minor flow and word choice problems, those will fix themselves the more you write, so don't worry about it.

But like I said above, all in all it was pretty decent.