|Reviews for The Lost Girl|
| Cyberchao X chapter 8 . 11/5/2013
...I think I'd better stop here. Too many potential spoilers.
| Cyberchao X chapter 7 . 11/5/2013
It's certainly easy enough to do, what with Ushio being a near-exact copy of her mother.
| Cyberchao X chapter 6 . 11/5/2013
An altogether amazing chapter.
| Cyberchao X chapter 5 . 11/5/2013
So, the theatre club is still in disarray...Theater is so underappreciated in high schools. I took a theater class in my freshman year of high school. By the time I graduated, there WERE no theater classes at my high school-not enough people taking them to justify keeping them around.
| Cyberchao X chapter 4 . 11/5/2013
Akio's a good guy, deep down. He's just a total nutjob.
| Cyberchao X chapter 3 . 11/5/2013
Cute. The parallels with Tomoya's experience are fun, though I'm not sure if I understand the whole Risha thing.
| Cyberchao X chapter 2 . 11/5/2013
Um...16 would be the expected age at the start of your junior year, same as in America. I know, it can be confusing because their schools go 6-3-3 while ours go either 5-3-4 or, increasingly often, 4-4-4...although from what I've heard, 6-3-3 used to be the norm here, too.
| Cyberchao X chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
Interesting. Would not have thought to have "title pages". Also, was surprised to see some familiar fics-I'd completely forgotten seeing your author name before, having reached this fic via your author page on account of filters bringing me to its sequel. (Currently on a Kotomi binge). I'll have to check out your further work in the Katawa Shoujo department when I'm done here.
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/8/2012
I know this story is finished, but this story is so similar to clannad. Having the guy have a bad relationship with his father, making Ushio timid and shy. just saying.
| Neko-Tenchi chapter 16 . 11/19/2011
I take back what i said before about the tomoya part, now i see why she wasnt living with him, im a little dissapointed the it diddnt go along witht he clanned story lie, but not so dissapointed because your story is so cute. i was so sad about the nagisa part. i really like this
| Neko-Tenchi chapter 5 . 11/19/2011
I think the story is really cute, but i dont like how ushio doesnt live with tomoya and also i hate how your story looks like your writing Clanned but substituting Ushio's name for Nagisa. those are my only problems. other than tht i love how in charater everyone is and i like your main charater. this is not a flame, it is constructive critism, i really like your story and im just sayong what parts i dont like
| Fallerullandeig chapter 17 . 9/20/2011
Too much Déjà vu? Just sayin'
| mike11208 chapter 22 . 3/14/2011
i love this story. it was an awesome Clannad thing, and it was well written. and i hope to hear from you on the After Story cause that's something i'm looking forward to. awesome job man!
| Dark Void Princess 21 chapter 22 . 3/13/2011
| xx Sunshine Girl xx chapter 22 . 3/13/2011
Sorry, I really wanted to log in, but FF won't let me do it on my Itouch for some infuriateing reason.
Anyway, this storyLOVE! It's so sweet and great and wonderful!
Your writing skills are good, you've definently got potential. Ushio and Tokoi are the cutest, sweetest little couple*well, except for Tomoya and Nagisa of course*
And, all in all this story is was great read! I'll be waiting eagerly for the After Story part!