Reviews for When they are together
ForeverYoursEmma chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
You end your poems so nicely. This poem was a nice read. I loved the way you wrote Gale's views and how he dies inside when she kisses Peeta. This is a great poem.

-Emma

(Judge for Best Single Poem, Winter 2010 Hunger Games Fic Awards)
Sapphire Wych chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
god. im crying. i never cry. i watched flicka with some friends and i was the only one not crying. even the guys cried. please writwe something with gale and katniss together. please. i dont like crying. at least write me into hg and cf so i can kiss gale.
Tennis Freak chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
:...( this is sad :P
RadiantFlame chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
*cries

you're really good with these one-shot poems!

write more!
GaleLover8 chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
:') That made me cry. especially the last line. Amazing.
mockingjayde chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
Oh my gosh! I LOVE this! This is a great poem. I especially liked the ending. So sad! But really good, and very Gale-y. :)
Tour de Force chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
Oh, this was an excellent poem. At least, I am going to say it's a freeverse poem. I liked it a lot and good job!
LoveTheBoyWithTheBread chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
I actually loved this.

*impressed.*

Good job!

-Mel
samira parsa chapter 1 . 6/12/2010
aw :( this was really good. i loved the last line

"and it stays broken" *tear*
stephhe chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
thats really true and beautiful
Penelope Wendy Bing chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
Interesting. The rhyme was off around the middle sometimes, but not bad overall.

-P.W. Bing