|Reviews for House of the Setting Sun 10: Demon in Red|
| Leon Stryfe chapter 22 . 1/4
A new year's miracle; you're back! A welcome return indeed by one of my favorite fanfic writers.
Alright, enough smoke blown. I enjoyed the piece. I especially liked how, just when everything was about to go to hell, again, for the Chosen Two, they didn't. It didn't quite have that sappy-happy ending I crave, but still.
I didn't notice any grammatical issues and I'm chalking it up to more than just my excitement that you are working on this piece again.
My only real complaint was the length. Once I realised that I had indeed read the first portion before (seriously, it didn't dawn on me that the '30 minutes ago' was a review until I had finished that section), the piece seemed even shorter. Still, I'm thrilled that you're back on this (as if you couldn't tell) and I eagerly await more!
| jane chapter 21 . 7/3/2013
omg, I just spent like the last 3 days reading this whole series including "no time to choose" you have to at least give me some sort of epilogue!
| Cara Cal Ipsofacto chapter 21 . 1/10/2013
Gorram it - i started reading this without realising it wasn't finished, I love this series of stories, pleases finish this soon!
| Numbers7o913 chapter 21 . 12/27/2012
Please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please UPDATE! You're killing me here! I need closure!
| ajnab36330 chapter 21 . 10/26/2012
When will we be getting a new installment on this? I've been waiting so long to find out what's going to happen between Willow and Kennedy as well as Faith and Buffy. COME BACK!
| chcdom chapter 21 . 10/25/2012
I miss this fic! Please come back to it.
| crisangel chapter 21 . 8/25/2012
Is that it?
| crisangel chapter 10 . 8/25/2012
I'm not always that great at picturing Goorzie, but somehow the image of her in sunglasses and a trench coat made me literally laugh out loud. Not sure why, but I even stuck a newspaper in there too :-p
| crisangel chapter 6 . 8/25/2012
Why does no one ever use their cell phone? lol
| blue talith chapter 21 . 7/14/2012
The end? Or not? It's been a very good story to date!
| castle of glass chapter 21 . 7/10/2012
What the hell happened to new years eve? Ive read through the whole series in the past week and I have to say this is a very good story. Your writing of the characters is amazing and I can totaly see your episodes being actual episodes for Buffy. Its seem to be skill of yours to be able to make a scene flow seamlessly from comedy to drama and back to comedy. Overall I think you should have been a script writer for the show when it was airing. please update and finish the story.
| anon chapter 21 . 3/26/2012
I love this series. You're so good at writing in character. I hope you update soon.
| AShadowedLife chapter 21 . 3/10/2012
Just finished reading this entire series collection, and i have to say, it is one of the most closely written in-character BtVS story I have ever read. You have everyone down pat! Love the Buffy/Faith-yness...my favourite pair by far, I reckon. Love that you can keep in the comedy stylings of the show, but still have the angsty-drama stuff of their relationship keeping you on your toes.
Hope you update this soon, am dying to see them finally work through some of their shit lol. Really hope you somehow bring Janey back into it, I loved Faith being placed in the mentor-leader role and having someone actually looking up to her. She needs more stuff like that.
And would love to read either a normal conversation, or a therapy session, where Buffy finally gets to hear some about Faith's childhood, history, and what happened with Lol in the jail and her thoughts after she dodged parole. Also be interesting to have Buffy learn about how Faith tried to have Angel kill her in Season 4 BtVS/Season 1 Angel...because although they're working through their problems, it seems that Buffy still somewhat blames Faith for everything in their past without really thinking about how Faith was feeling...it would be great to read her seeing the more vulnerable side of the Dark Slayer.
Just my thoughts, PLEEEEAAAASSSEEE update soon, I know its only been, like, 3 months, but for someone who just tuned in, it seems like a lifetime lol. Keep up the great writing!
| Squeewockle chapter 21 . 12/24/2011
Okay, I completely burst out laughing when Buffy says that Santa's just a creepy fat guy in a suit to those kids...
| Son of Soul Reaver chapter 21 . 12/24/2011
Seriously? It was Santa? That is messed up. That talk between the slayers felt like a massive weight lifting off of them.