Reviews for Persona Eternity Soul
Azurerin chapter 2 . 12/14/2010
Hmm, first of all, I'd say that I'm very interested with this story. Characters from P3 and P4 are coming together and I really look forward to the next chapter!

Just some things that have bothered me when I read this... I think the timeline got rather twisted around here... P4 takes place in 2011-2012 if I remember correctly, and if this story takes place in 2017, I think Souji would've been around 23, while Akihiko would've been around 26 already... And also, I'm rather surprised to read that Yukari's dad and Shinji are there when they took the photograph... But well, that's just what I think...

And also... I'm rather sad that Souji is with Yukiko in this fic... Oh, I don't have anything against that, it's just that I preferred him to be with Naoto, but well, maybe this is not possible in this story due to some family relationship between them, even though it's not too close...

But I'd say that I enjoyed this fic overall, keep up the good work, and I'll move on reading for now...
CrAzY-SiLLy-Me chapter 4 . 11/27/2010
Lemon didn't suck :3

I'm actually glad it contained an Akihiko x Minako lemon too - it's hard to look for fics of them with well-written ones, this is probably my second time to read a lemon scene of them without cringing. :D

I'll be keeping an eye on this story! THe plot has caught my interest, even if I have yet to play other persona series.
Traisa chapter 4 . 9/15/2010
wow! your story is so cool! :D i really like how you tell it and your idea was just AMAZING. please release the next chapter.. :D thank you for your hard work!
I'm Doxophobic chapter 4 . 9/14/2010
That did NOT suck at all. I read it, and I loved it.

I feel so bad for Minako, taking into account that

it's going to be another goodbye that will rip one's

poor heart. Meh, I'm a Shinjiro, and damn it, I shouldn't

be reading these angsty fics.

Don't be mean, update soon! /coughs. I'm.. not being

mean, by the way! :p
pchan17 chapter 4 . 9/1/2010
ooohh...compliments to the author! *squeals for akihiko* very very nice!
caramelmilktea chapter 4 . 8/31/2010
I love this chapter so much. the reunion was so heart warming and exactly what I have in mind (akihiko wants minako to himself). this chapter really boosts the past chapters. can't wait for the next chapter! hope it would be even more interesting. keep up the good work!
Shy is the name chapter 4 . 8/31/2010
This was great, and the way you wrote Minako here was beautiful. To be honest though, latter on, the entire crew should go looking for a way to prevent them from leaving. Wither it is impossible or not, it would still be a cute side thing in the story. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter. So totally need to know what's gunna happen.
IreLi chapter 4 . 8/31/2010
This is so sweet! I like the way you wrote their (AkiXMinako) reunion. I read through 2 times already, I hope u update very soon. I can feel the passion, and Aki now became so dominated~~~ Love it!
Astrih Konnash chapter 4 . 8/31/2010
Just one word to describe this chapter - *SWEET*
Hamujiro chapter 4 . 8/31/2010
finnaly akihiko scene i like it so much ohhh please continue please
Hamujiro chapter 4 . 8/31/2010
finnaly akihiko scene i like it so much ohhh please continue please
jory014 chapter 4 . 8/31/2010
since you had a lemon... you should make this rated M... even if you didn't go on full throttle with the lemon thing...

but other than that I LOVE IT! XD go MSHExAKHIKO! wahahahahaah XD i was smiling the whole time while I read it i was really like wahhh! so so so so nice so sweet and dammn sad T-T

anyways good job dude! keep on going! TC

;p

-jory014
Shy is the name chapter 3 . 8/29/2010
Please, for the love of God, or whatever deiity people pray to these days, update soon. I love this story and really, really want to know what is going to happen. It's a beautiful story and i need to see the end. Please, i'll owe you big.
pmch chapter 3 . 8/26/2010
Oh...no...please don just stop here...I really can't wait...please update soon...

Your story is just so well-planned...not to mention that I am a hugh fans of Aki X Minako...
jory014 chapter 3 . 8/17/2010
CRAP, WHY DOES IT HAVE TO END THERE! T-T

OBVIOUSLY I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE SO... I'LL DEFINITELY BE KEEPING MY TABS ON THIS ONE... DESPITE THE FACT THAT I DON'T KNOW PERSONA4'S STORY I THINK THIS CROSSOVER WOULD BE A BLAST! KEEP IT UP!

SORRY FOR THE CAPS ;P I'M JUST EXCITED WAHAHAHAHAH THE PLOT IS JUST DAMN INTERESTING!

TC

-jory014
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