Reviews for The Guardian
Gunman47 chapter 2 . 12/30/2014
Why. No third part? Your story is great. Please finish it.. I know its been 4 years but please
Guest chapter 2 . 3/2/2013
Very good. I hope you will finish the story.
SimplyOut chapter 2 . 8/22/2012
This is genius, please continue :D
PsychoWing chapter 2 . 1/28/2012
This is a very interesting story. I'm looking forward to the last chapter.
KylaRyan chapter 2 . 10/9/2011
I really love this, and do hope that get around to posting the final part soon.~KR
Libbydibbs chapter 2 . 9/4/2011
Okay, no. just no. you can't write an incredibly epic story and then leave all of your trusty fans just hanging for more for OVER A YEAR. Either post an A/N so we'll all stop hoping or UPDATE YOUR AWESOME MEGA AMAZING STORY RIGHT NOW MISTER! (Or lady. sorry, mister sounded better.)
HAMUCHA chapter 2 . 7/26/2011

Love the story. Can't wait to read ch.3. But I see you haven't updated for quite some time know. Are you ever gonna continue? I really hope so. Please let me know, ok.
DELETED ACCOUNT 10123 chapter 2 . 9/1/2010
More? Please?

Really good.

spookysister7 chapter 2 . 8/24/2010
plz continue
brokenclaw chapter 2 . 8/15/2010
I love this story! Great job, looking forward to part 3!
heartfallen chapter 2 . 8/15/2010
Awesome story! I can't wait for more
Linoria chapter 2 . 8/14/2010
Great story! Looking forward to more!

Thundera Tiger chapter 2 . 8/6/2010
I would have reviewed this earlier, but I'm only just now getting around to it. Sorry! Anyway, amazing story! That looks as though it still has one more chapter to go? I'm all for that. But even without that third chapter, this is stellar work. The background you lay for the action is complete enough to give us a good picture of what's going on but not long enough or involved enough to bog the story. You keep the focus squarely on Peter and Neal, and I love it. As for those two, great job with characterization. Peter is a wonderful mix of gruff protectiveness, and the way Neal reads him like a book just made my day. You've got a very extreme situation on your hands, and you handle the characters well in it. So many authors use the extreme as a chance to push characters beyond what they really ought to be doing, but you keep Peter and Neal firmly in bounds, letting them react to the extreme while still pulling them back to base norm. Because in the end, that's what these two seem to rely on to get them through things. Fantastic job! I'm definitely adding this story to my list of favorites!
Tinnuial chapter 2 . 7/26/2010
I've just gotten into this fandom and this is the first WC fic I have reviewed...and I think you might've spoiled me for anything else I might read later because your writing is awesome! Peter is so adorable when he gets all protective. I will be looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you for sharing! :)
MontyPythonFan chapter 2 . 7/26/2010
LOVED this fic:-D Especially the 2-chaptered POV situation. -character, done :-D


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