Reviews for The Moment
CoffeeKake chapter 1 . 2/11
This is how it should've freaking gone! I mean seriously! Who lets a phone ringing stop a kiss?
April-Showers82 chapter 1 . 6/12/2014
Although this theme has been done, I really like yours. It is certainly more realistic and probable. Good job!
thisaintascene84 chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
loved it
Twilightlover1234567890 chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
lol! that is funny. I wish Alice would have walked in and been all "BELLA! THINK ABOUT EDWARD!"
kat kasie chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
i always thought " why didnt they just ignore the phone?" and then you come out with this fanfic. i love it!
Zapphe chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
It's pretty good for a short story.
tatiana chapter 1 . 10/28/2011
This need's a sequel
Vaako chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
Aww, I wish this happened :D Great fic!
MrInigo1995 chapter 1 . 1/12/2011
I love this story!
pj chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
omg there sould be a
NUNICHAN chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
Hell yes! This was exaclty what stupid Jacob should've done when the phone rang. Loved the fact that you didn't forget Alice was around and could hear and see them. You should do a sequel.
weflytothetardis chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
OMG! i loved this story! r u gonna continue?
leelator chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
This was sooo cute and sexy. AND it makes sense! Loved it. Thanks for sharing this little gem with us!
Kanu chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
I really liked your story. i actually thought the same thing once.. why not ignore the phone? I enjoyed the way ti flowed and i think you did a good job.
kimluvs2read chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
Yep that is what I think should have happened and Edward be damned! He shouldn't have left her there alone! Great story, very well written, I love getting both POV's!
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