|Reviews for Change the Future|
| Guest chapter 7 . 5/28
Update it been to long
| Kittens Kat chapter 7 . 6/28/2014
I LIKE THIS STORY! THANK YOU!
| Guest chapter 7 . 4/4/2014
| Yumi Nakamura Chan chapter 7 . 7/27/2013
i like it
| Capt.Freedom chapter 7 . 5/19/2013
Okay for the rant at the end of the story chapter i want to point out a few mistakes that i found. Granted you have not updated this story for almost 3 years.
Yes i agree Naruto does have the mind of a 24 year old warrior, tho he is in a 12 year old's body so i concur with you on that that that part.
One the land of waves is more of like a state to the Land of fire do to the fact that they are inside the border of the land of fire and the land of waves does not have it's own a Ninja village, upon looking at a map of the Naruto world i would say it would be more of a week to week and a half of travel because remember they could have hitched rides as well with merchants going the same way and they had no reason to stop besides to rest or camp.
And i know a few contractors they have time budgets as well as money budgets to keep to and for every day they go over their budget they lose more money so i would say tazuna would want to get home ASAP not only for his family but to say on time as well because to me he seems like that type of guy.
At this point i know you may seem upset with me and that you could less about this review because i am picking away at your rant. one thing i have learned about writing is that some people are willing to help make you a better writer and that is what i am hoping to do as well by informing you about stuff.
Now two, your time line is off but lets be honest even the manga and Anime did not give a good detail in how much time was spent on the mission. but from what i know the Chunin Exams are held every six months which would mean that by the time Naruto and the other rookie 9 graduated it was already 3 months after the last Chunin exam at the most. now you think with D-Ranked missions like helping out around the village most of those mission where just daily chores that people did not want to do. but they had to be divided amongst the whole group of rookie 9 and others that had not been promoted yet ether so most of the days they where not doing anything but training or relaxing.
Now i would like to say one more thing before i end the review People will ask question no matter what because they want to know more info so you have to expect a lot of questions when you change what the Manga or anime showed because its coming from your mind, now with that with the clones and people asking why is Naruto not using the clones as much will. it is good to not bore people with repeated details but some times some details help make people understand more about how the Character develops over time.
Well i hope this helps and that you update this story sometime soon because it is a good story.
| A-01 chapter 7 . 12/5/2012
Normally I don't like stories where Naruto has multiple wives, but so far I've liked the execution of this story and have found it easy to follow and enjoyable to absorb, it's a shame that this hasn't been updated for so long so I sincerely hope you get a second wind for this story and pick it back up :)
| Shadowprice chapter 7 . 10/14/2012
this is great make more
| froger495 chapter 7 . 10/5/2012
cant wait for the next chapter
| lightskiller chapter 7 . 9/15/2012
good story. there are a few grammer mistakes, and sorry but i can't remember exactly where they are. when will the next chapter be out?
| 69AnimeFreak69 chapter 7 . 8/13/2012
first thing: UPDATE! second: WHY THE HELL DID NARUTO IGNORE GAARA?
| DJChef7 chapter 7 . 7/29/2012
| kellerblair chapter 2 . 5/31/2012
These chapters are to short
| El Frijolero chapter 7 . 12/26/2011
Good story but your sort of making the relationships too fast still a good story though
| shadowfang jutsu chapter 7 . 12/6/2011
plz update soon this is a great story
| OnewingedAngel118 chapter 7 . 11/29/2011
Nice Story! :D