|Reviews for The Adventure of the Underground Crypt|
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/5/2015
oh whyyyy! why are some of your most beautiful stories aren't complete (even though they're all beautiful) please continue this!
| Speedykitten1643 chapter 4 . 11/26/2011
Wow this story is great so far and I love the chapters. Its been a while since your last update so I hope you will update again soon.
| James Birdsong chapter 4 . 8/31/2010
Good stuff. Perfect stuff.
| NortheasternWind chapter 4 . 8/30/2010
Charon being suspicious of Autor is understandable, but a little sad... Fakir is unchanged, blah! Though really that's not unexpected.
Ahiru worrying about not being around Fakir enough is so believable. Don't worry Ahiru! Fakir would want you being useful!
Why is Kinkan so gossipy? Even my school isn't that gossipy! Lame students! Lilie is, as usual, so predictably annoying that I'm not sure it's possible for anyone to ever write her out of character. Pike assuming it's true but noting that it's not like Ahiru at all was nice, I think... Pike is so hard to write when she's standing next to Lilie.
N'aw, see? The upperclassmen do care! And at least the teachers are doing their jobs.
I hope Ahiru's study period comes soon too X3
| chibi heishi chapter 4 . 8/29/2010
...why no one has gagged Lillie yet I have no idea... "Silence is golden, but duct tape is silver" after all.
| Moon Shadow Magic chapter 4 . 8/29/2010
Ah, the over- analyzed gossip of school-! I don't miss it either. And finally Duck blows her top over it... Pique looking guilty and Lillie being oblivious are quite in character, as is *someone* asking the teacher about it as if Duck isn't there!
Charon is well- done too, I thought, starting to take Autor under his wing along with all the others.
| Nanenna chapter 4 . 8/29/2010
Mme. is a new one, I've never seen it before! What's it mean?
I think you did justice to Pique and Lillie, they seemed in character to me. I don't know how Pique puts up with Lillie at all, most of the time it's like she doesn't even notice how crazy Lillie is at all. Poor Ahiru, it's just one thing after another, even the embodiment of Hope is going to crumble after all that.
| xxFireWarriorxx chapter 3 . 8/8/2010
Heyy! Sorry for the ridiculously late review... -_-
BUT, that aside, another wonderfully written chapter!
I really enjoyed the part where you really zeroed in on Autor and his past/experiences. It was nice to have him talk it over with Ahiru, who's always ready to listen. _ Also loved that part where Ahiru was crashing all over the place. XD Really reminded me of episode 12 when she and Fakir were stumbling all over the place looking for Mytho. Or, at least Ahiru was. ;D
Anyways, looking forward to the update! Hope it comes soon. :)
| Crystal Rose of Pollux chapter 3 . 7/30/2010
"what better place to explore deep topics than while wandering through old and creepy tunnels?" LOL, I must remember that!
And LOL, I tend to find Ahiru's ghost-phobia more amusing than I probably should-I loved Autor's line about using her temper to scare them back.
And wow... deep topics indeed! I love Autor's description about loved ones in more than one plane. So sad, too, when there really always will be a void...
The bits describing the Afterlife... wow. Just... wow.
And eep-malfunctioning flashlights are never good...
And the turn of events are highly intriguing-particularly whether the Keep Out message was human or ghostly in nature...
| Nanenna chapter 3 . 7/22/2010
That was a pretty deep conversation, but it also was one that was long coming. It's a long and slow healing process, even when the deceased suddenly comes back to life (unless there's a revolving door on death and people treat it like a business trip).
| James Birdsong chapter 3 . 7/22/2010
Certainly a fine chapter three.
| xxFireWarriorxx chapter 2 . 6/20/2010
Hmmm, gems? What could gems possibly do with anything? I thought of Miss Edel at first, but she's long gone, isn't she?
Of all the twists... THAT I was no expecting. XD
Anyways, great description as always! Loved the characterization as well. :D Seems like an awesome story so far so I hope you'll update soon! :)
| xxFireWarriorxx chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
First things first: that allude to Domino City? GENIUS. :D I swear, I read that, and went: ain't that the truth. XD Very cleverly implemented. I enjoyed that a lot. _
But anyways, DAMN THOSE THICK-HEADED NUMBSKULLS... Why must people gossip all the time? Poor Autor... he's really getting the brunt of the attack, isn't he?
Hope they he and Ahiru figured out the mystery soon! :D
| Moon Shadow Magic chapter 2 . 6/9/2010
The fun continues! (Um. Are the jewels Miss Edel's stock from her stand...?) And yes, Charon would have an old wooden- case wall phone, one of the ones that looks like it's got a face because of the voice pickup and the bells on the outside, and a cloth- covered wire connecting to the earpiece, that you have to crank. And Autor has one of those fancy brass- trimmed models. (We had a rotary phone until the mid- '90's, when it just got to be too inconvenient. It was about thirty years old or older, and was still leased from the phone company. In fifteen years or so I think we've worn out three phones bought new.) Anyway, present day or not, I can still see the town as leery of the telephone, and using the most antique things available.
| Crystal Rose of Pollux chapter 2 . 6/9/2010
I love how Charon immediately says that Autor can be trusted.
But yikes at the diagnosis, especially the doctor's worry...
And creepy thought that the ghosts wanted Autor to see Fakir lying there...
And the eavesdropping students... wow, how annoying...
Autor's musings about the ghosts doing something to Fakir are quite poignant and chilling, and that he might have to be the one to undo what has been done to Fakir.
LOL at his reasons for knowing how to pick locks, though!
And ooh, the descriptions of what happens are so chilling, from the cackle to Ahiru feeling the icy hands to the dimming torches.
And wow... that was an unexpected find...