|Reviews for The Ruins of Alph|
| Bromidche chapter 1 . 1/5/2014
| Hazel Sparks chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
I'm not really into Pokemon but I really like your poetry and I enjoyed the fic anyways :)
You have definitely succeeded in conveying the 'sense of eerie awe' of this chamber, wherever it is, if that was your goal :) I especially like the words like lurking and icy fingers and masked for the poem, and the organization of stanzas. I'll have to check this Pokemon stuff out :)
- Hazel Sparks,
author of The Escape
| Omega the Omniscient chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
Very nice. I agree, there is that sense of eerie awe that music manages to instill.
| Maid of Blood chapter 1 . 4/7/2011
i love this poem i wish i could write like you
| The Suicune chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
Funny, in my PMD3 game I just reached the Unown ruins just before I read this. Great feeling once again.