| Reviews for Alice Longbottom II and her Potter problems |
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   EnigmaticEmperor chapter 6 . 11/10/2023 Really enjoyed this fic! Alice's monologue was so fun! |
| Just a reader chapter 1 . 11/12/2020 Is AS supposed to be Albus Severus? |
| Angie chapter 6 . 7/6/2020 C'est une super fanfiction ! |
| Writemore chapter 1 . 8/12/2017 Write another JALICE story pleeeeaaassseee And do you know hysterical is like this- that joke was so Hysterical |
| CrayolaCreation chapter 6 . 4/5/2013 Ah, short and sweet! :) |
| ebdarcy.qt4good chapter 6 . 4/4/2013 Great work! |
| hihihihihihi chapter 3 . 1/28/2013 I think its really cute how u made a tally between the two characters |
| Chaotic Courtney chapter 6 . 9/6/2011 This story was great and I loved how you finished it off on a joke, but it's my personal opinion you should include just a bit more dialogue. It helps to convey the story. . . or maybe just me. ;) |
| hppjdragpncode chapter 6 . 6/19/2011 Great story! James II/Neville's daughter is my favorite next generation pairing, though I call Neville's daughter Annie. I also like how they were described as childhood friends, that would make since. I really liked this story! |
| karoolis chapter 6 . 1/9/2011 really cute, please make a sequel! |
| dork-with-glasses chapter 2 . 10/12/2010 I do like this story quite a bit, although I don't think I'll finish reading it. I like the idea you've got and the relationship (for the most part) between James and Alice. The thing that bugs me is that in Alice's thoughts it seems like she idolises him. It just sometimes seems she thinks of him as a god-like being that is far superior to her, I just don't like how she undermines herself to make James seem more brilliant. Also, the way she talks about him (and I have no idea if this changes in the next couple of chapters), it seems like he has no flaws which does irritate me a bit. Regardless, it is still a really good idea. |
| thestorythatshewrote chapter 6 . 7/6/2010 loved it! |
| SilenceIsCompliance chapter 6 . 7/6/2010 I love this story. Adorable adorable wonderful adorable! |
| SilenceIsCompliance chapter 5 . 7/6/2010 I can't wait for them to get together! I hope it's soon! |
| SilenceIsCompliance chapter 3 . 7/6/2010 AWKWARD!love it! |