Reviews for The White Menace
Jake chapter 1 . 5/4/2011
Nice story line so far, I am intrieged to read more, howevere I think you should describe landscape more. A little haizy on exactly whether or not they are exactly dealing with this battle from bladehenge or another location close to bladehenge.
prostoann14 chapter 11 . 8/21/2010
Its AWESOME! x)))

*dreaming about the next chapter*

(sorry for awful English X_X)
bdun chapter 11 . 6/29/2010
between Kabbage Boy getting eaten and the line "hope, freedom, and beer." this was avery awsome chapter. as a suggestion, have eddie and co. aid the gaurdian during the duel by, i duno, destroying power crystals or something.
bdun chapter 8 . 6/29/2010
its good, but... short.