|Reviews for Author Fighters: The Assassin's Guild|
| NobodieZ chapter 5 . 4/27/2011
Great work on this chapter. SOrry for the late review.
| KittenHachiChan chapter 5 . 4/27/2011
Now THIS is wicked dude! I'll get through my next fic and write my intro fic! HA ha!
| ChaosMagemon chapter 5 . 4/27/2011
It's getting better than before
| KittenHachiChan chapter 4 . 7/15/2010
Dang . . . some cliffie.
Oh man I hate cliffies . . .
| Amber Pegasus chapter 4 . 7/15/2010
What a exciting update.
| NobodieZ chapter 4 . 7/15/2010
you never fail with the action, do you? great work.
| ChaosMagemon chapter 4 . 7/15/2010
| Amber Pegasus chapter 3 . 6/28/2010
| Ranger24 chapter 2 . 6/26/2010
Yeah i'm not the one who uses the dragonbreaker I use a dessert eagle. Its name is friging sol
| NobodieZ chapter 3 . 6/26/2010
good fight scene. can a samuri work with a ninja? we soon see. Here a suggestion. at some point in the story where Tohokari say something about all ninijas are evil. DM can could say. "I should introduce to Naruto and some of his friends. They're all Ninjas but they are good guys.
| NobodieZ chapter 2 . 6/26/2010
good job. but maybe you could describe the scene and background a little more.
| NobodieZ chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
great start for thr story.
| Hikari Ino chapter 3 . 6/23/2010
it looks like Tohokari isn't going to get along with me well, and it seems he has lost his mother as well I saw me and him find common ground on that and I cna't wait to see where it leads TL-san
| ChaosMagemon chapter 3 . 6/23/2010
Not bad at all
| KittenHachiChan chapter 3 . 6/23/2010
Awesome doesn't even begint to decribe how that is man!