|Reviews for Monsieur|
| gravity01 chapter 14 . 1/31
I just read this article from the POV of a "troubled teen". You know, the kind who's parents send them to some kind of camp or program in Montana to... wilderness the depression out of them?
I always wondered how they get to those places... and she explained how teen escort services work. How parents can essentially hire someone to kidnap their child. They even encourage parents not to tell their children beforehand (in case it scares them) and allow them to pick the teen up in the middle of the night when they're sleepy and disoriented. I thought "no way is this legal" but I read out the website of one company and it Totally Is! Because parents temporarily sign their rights away and the kid is still a minor so the escort can take them anywhere by any means necessary (including restraints in case they decide to protest once they get to the airport). And once they get to their destination, there's not much that can be done since Montana doesn't have a lot of laws regarding how treatment facilities treat minors (which I totally understand, btw. I grew up there and a lot of anti-government people move their BECAUSE there aren't a lot of laws... regarding anything. Honest, they didn't even have a Speed Limit until about 20 years ago!). So as long as the kid isn't 18 yet, the treatment program has the right to do pretty much whatever. And it's all legal!. If the kid is lucky, they can earn a five minute, supervised phone call to their parents... although, if they say anything negative, they're immediately disconnected for being 'manipulative'.
Anyway, as I'm reading this article, my mind keeps drifting to this story (even though I hadn't read it in a while). Couldn't you just SEE Christine's dad doing something like this? Especially if he thinks she's depressed or on drugs. And what a perfect opportunity for Erik to move on. Full custody of Christine with legal right to do whatever he thought was professionally necessary and she wouldn't even have the ability to tell anyone about it until she was 18! And I could imagine Erik could arrange for her to 'disappear' (or at least forgotten) before that important birthday.
Even if her dad was hesitant, he could be easily convinced... It sounds like he's at the end of his rope already. This would seem like an easy (albeit expensive) solution.
Anyway... that's what came to mind. I was totally shocked at how parents could work the legal system and suddenly it made sense how Erik is allowed to get away with what he's gotten away with so far.
I truly hope you'll decide to return to this story. I honestly miss it. It might possibly be my favorite on this site (and I have read a LOT).
| PhantomChristine chapter 17 . 9/17/2013
Hi! Awesome phanphiction, by the way. Kinda creepy, but that's the only ones I read anyway. If you want something as about as creepy as this one, read Shades of Black, people. This and that are totally freaky and creeped me out, which I loved.
| Elena chapter 6 . 9/5/2013
I adore your writing style! You definately have talent
| Aguna chapter 17 . 3/16/2013
Love the story so far, will there be more?
| Century11 chapter 17 . 2/26/2013
Screw what everybody else is complaining about this is your fanfiction! I personaly love your version of Eric and i would not change anything about him. I like his anger management issues and you can tell that he loves her deeply. Seriously screw what everyone else is saying. Your version of eric makes him unique. And i love reading this fanfiction. I hope that you continue it! Because so far this one is the best.
| Century11 chapter 16 . 2/26/2013
I personaly loved all of the chapters mate!
| Birthday girl chapter 16 . 2/3/2013
Today's my birthday. I want a new chapter of Monsieur as a present. Please ? :*
| Rock The Rain chapter 17 . 9/2/2012
I adore this story. Your writing is phenomenal and I hope you don't give up on this fandom. :) It's fics like yours that keep me reading Phantom fanfiction. Please update soon.
| NotNearlyElla chapter 17 . 8/14/2012
I don't normally review stories anymore, I just thought I should make an exception for this story. I have only just discovered Phanom of the Opera (and all it's awesomeness) and the fanfictions I have read normally do not have the darkness which I loved about the origional. I read your story and I just wanted to say thank you, for writing such an amazing and dark (and just so addicting) story! :) I read your authers note and I understand that you may not want to continue due to the lack of dark Erik stories but I just wanted to enplore that you do finish this story. Please, please, please finish your fantastic story. I need to know how it ends! And thank you for posting such an amazing story!
P.s I hope I didn't sound too overenthusiastic I just really like this story and wanted to let you know! :)
| That-Spoons-Girl chapter 17 . 7/29/2012
I've been reading fan fiction for years and I can truthfully say yours is one of the best i have ever read. I hope you update soon!
| Hellsings-Ceras chapter 17 . 7/21/2012
I just stumbled over your Fanficton (well, "just" is over 24 hours ago) and i couldnt stop reading!
I love your take on Erik (hes far to often portraid as a week fool- sorry. I just feel most authors forget or ignore his crazy side).
No matter how long it takes for you to update, Ill be waiting.
But please, update as fast as you can!
| JuneWiddows chapter 17 . 7/17/2012
Love it, really good. Please update soon.
P. S. Usually these kind of fics don't really appeal to me, but i love this crazy Erik. Christine is really weak and can't fight him. Whenevr I read something along the lines of a weak heroine, i always think i could fight him off if i was there, but no, even if it's possible physically, i's be paralyzed with fright.
Sorry, long afternote. You really have great potentail though. Luv ya
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/1/2012
Just a question, was the name Humbert in here a reference to Lolita? Otherwise I find the name selection exceptionally ironic.
| Guest chapter 16 . 6/29/2012
Well...dang. He has just got a bit of a temper on him doesn't he? Haha..great chapter! Please keep the updates comming..atleast every once in a while :)
| Meganne chapter 17 . 6/26/2012
Emmanuelle -such a pretty name!-, I'm in love with your story.