Reviews for The New Beginning
happyckick.niji chapter 4 . 9/16/2012
dont make the chapters so short
Shadows Curse chapter 3 . 7/26/2012
I knw
Shadows Curse chapter 4 . 7/26/2012
you did a good job on this fic I enjoyed reading this though your wtiting is bit squashed together you should try spacing it out and explaining things a bit more thoroughly you know dont be afraid and just a few questions how are there so many autobots and decepticons *yes I do realize that this is a fanFICTION and we can wright what ever the hell we want im still curious* and why are the decepticons on pandora Ooh one more ques whats up with optimus? but please dont take me wrong I really did like this and the idea of what your having this be turned into is good and I hope you get the next chapter up soon
Iceshadow911247 chapter 4 . 5/26/2012
Okay, really like this iea. But you an make it better by:

1) You could make the chapters a bit longer. Most chapters tend to be more about a thousand words.

2) You could explain the events a little more, instead of rushing into things.

3) Don't forget that on Pandoa humans need CPUs to survive. (The need it to breathe.)

But other than that, I'm really looking forward to this story and see how it plays along.
Xireana Prime chapter 4 . 4/19/2012
whao... boss bot got a little darker... please update soon! i can't wait till the next chapter! chapter 4 . 10/10/2011
Will you pretty please with sugar on top contiune this? It's realy good, albiet short.
Rockubyebaby chapter 4 . 12/31/2010
I what to see more
Erin Primette chapter 4 . 12/21/2010
Great work! Keep it up!
redcloudedleopard chapter 3 . 6/6/2010
This is exciting! Please keep writing.
Grimlock1992 chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
this might be good also you might bring in toruk to help the autobots and when are autobots met the na'vi?