Reviews for Pale Shelter
Guest chapter 4 . 7/5
Bella has liked Edward this whole time, OBVIOUSLY. But in chapter 4 she says that it was then that she realized she had a crush on Edward Cullen? What a complete fucktard!
Guest chapter 2 . 7/4
So …..Edward usually wear a SUIT? And he smokes in the school...in front of everyone. Yup totally believable.

Your grammar is shit, you need to edit. Bella should notice anything too LATELY, too late ya, but not too lately. Moron.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/4
So bella is a no means yes kind of girl?

She said please don't do this...yet she was all over him like a whore. And what was with that weird biting shit? He drew blood, but bella kisses him anyway? WTF?
Guest chapter 1 . 7/4
Edward is smoking in the cafeteria at school? Ya...…..that's likely. So this fucking stupid.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/17/2017
That was a strange prologue...bellas all no stop...ohhh don't stop...no...yes...no...yes...make up your mind hoe bag!
And some prick bites her...and she says she loves him? UMMM noooooooooooooooooooooooo
Guest chapter 12 . 6/5/2016
Why does she need Alices approval. She should kind her own business.
Guest chapter 11 . 6/5/2016
What a pushover Bella is
Guest chapter 3 . 6/5/2016
Why does the cafetiere keep going 'silent' that's stupid and Jane being at her school is also stupid.
jk chapter 15 . 8/24/2015
if hes so obsessive and hes loved bella since 7th grade...how were there others? doesn't he have like a one track mind?
A2463 chapter 45 . 8/18/2015
great story.
kiara chapter 11 . 5/22/2015
In ghis story I want to slap Alice
Guest chapter 39 . 11/27/2014
What happened to, like, school and stuff? Did they graduate? Are they just not going?
Guest chapter 31 . 11/27/2014
He said that he first saw her in gym class in SEVENTH GRADE. So he had already dated Tanya before that? When he was like 12, or something and he was THAT emotionally involved with her?
Guest chapter 23 . 11/27/2014
Bella frustrates the crap out of me. She is such a doormat! Does she have no self respect? Does she even want t defend herself?
Guest chapter 17 . 11/27/2014
Edward doesn't stop to consider Bella's feelings before he does thigs and he makes all of her decisions for her without considering her feelings
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